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Open Poetry #12

Fight To Freedom

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-02-07 12:44 PM

Fresh battle scars aching
And old voices
that taunt me
A million yesterdays
swarm to fresh wounds
I cuddle up to sleep
Curled up tightly
as if to protect the deepest parts of me
Exhaustion winning, I sleep, whispering
One quiet wish to heal

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-07 12:52 PM

This certainly talks to me....well done!

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-07 12:55 PM

Thank you Sunshine. You're very kind.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-02-07 01:22 PM

and heal you shall my friend. . .

this is excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

4 posted 2001-02-07 01:47 PM

I liked this, you conveyed quite a bit in very few words. Thanks,
David2

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-02-07 02:04 PM

Expressed deeply with few words. Excellent writing, may you find solace soon

Take care,
Melissa~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-07 02:41 PM

I beleive these words are already written somewhere in my own heart, thank you for this post.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

7 posted 2001-02-07 03:22 PM

Sven - Thank you. A long hard road. I'll be thankful when it's over.

David2 - Appriciate that!  It's rare I say something in few words.  LOL!

Melissa - I hope so too.  Thank you......

Kathleen - I think in our own individual ways we all fight this fight.  Thanks for understanding!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

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