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Wander soul
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Wander soul |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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"Wander soul" Feelings inside lost and unknown To small to explain where I fit in my home Seeing nothing darkness surround Stars once there not now found Confused not knowing where I am to be My heart and soul escaping from me Once happy one time not so long ago Now life seems still, no longer to flow Movement gone, beating stunned A head without thought, Newness begun Forward stepping, direction not seen Untie my self from darkened dream Light shine in, show me a path Soul walk in heavenly grasp Let body replenish, vital compose Open eyes to vision not yet to be known Tomorrow moving, Body closer to me Inside my heart let me be free Live long forget memories in mind Days pass my soul through time |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Forward stepping, direction not seen Untie my self from darkened dream Light shine in, show me a path Soul walk in heavenly grasp Time does have a way of healing, if we give it a chance. Sometimes you just need to keep going even if you don't know where or how. You have expressed this with a lovely, haunting melody of a poem. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I think you have captured and expressed those feelings very well. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I can relate muchly to the feelings expressed in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, so can we all. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This had a dark theme, but I sensed so much to it....I enjoyed. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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