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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-02-07 09:32 AM

Turn out the lights

turn out the lights come to bed
let me ease those fears in your head
place your head on my chest
I'll rub your temples, help you rest
wrapped in my arms wont take long
as mind unwinds, again be strong
when I'm away this touch to miss
but tonight, sleep in unaltered bliss
so put your worries on the side
between these sheets you shall glide
warm embraces cover you in cold
and with your body, your heart I hold
with my embrace I do invite
sweet things happen in the night
so turn out the lights and come to bed

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-07-2001).]

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-02-07 09:37 AM

A gentle, soothing, and calming write.....wonderful!

Nathan

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-02-07 03:41 PM

Comforting and soft. Lovely write.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-07-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-02-07 03:43 PM

Helen, this is subtly sensual!!!!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-07 07:01 PM

perfect helen. . . absolutely perfect. . .

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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

5 posted 2001-02-07 09:56 PM

~click~

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

6 posted 2001-02-08 12:07 PM

Perfect way to be tucked in at night. Nice write Helen
Rich

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-02-09 05:05 PM

OMG!!! that was perfect

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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