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Open Poetry #12

Tired Eyes (Acrostic 2)

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

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0 posted 2001-02-07 12:34 PM

The storm
  inspires
    reason
      encircling emotives
        denying dreams

Eden simply must
  yet sing not itself
    ever teaching the
      soul song higher reaching

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-07-2001).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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1 posted 2001-02-07 07:40 AM

I'm still reading this for its multi-faceted connotations... I'm looking forward to reading more from you - Keep 'em coming..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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2 posted 2001-02-10 08:09 AM

*wow* what a wonderful expression.....enjoyed it very much

Charisma

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

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3 posted 2001-02-10 08:30 AM

Thank you both for your kind words of encouragement. And of course for taking time to read.

Thanks again.
AT

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2001-03-12 01:19 AM

AT, this is fantastic and I'll be keeping my eyes open for more of these jewels from you...
Thank you for the enjoyed read...
~coco~

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
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5 posted 2001-03-12 01:58 AM

Thank you. For some reason the muse demanded acrostic for near my first two dozen posts.

Glad you enjoyed, they are a different sort of challenge.

" I can lie to my mirror only so long as it chooses to listen to me, and look me in the eye."

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

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6 posted 2001-03-12 12:07 PM

"the soul song higher reaching" ~ nicely done. I have yet to write an acrostic, but believe I may consider one, thanks to reading yours. It seems to be a fun, yet interesting, form. Thanks for this one.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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