Open Poetry #12 |
Shadowed Words Hide And Seek |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
So definetely the night's raspy winter wind circulates, Entering within reasonable motions of gentle beastly glides. Entering here are the ones who seek both sides of the hour, And realize too late that the moments here, Suspend themselves in enrapturing evaporations, Crossing over themselves and restarting at the finish line. "This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer. Rainer Maria Rilke from "Le |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes....I enjoyed...restarting at the finish line...perfect. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Temptress, Wonderful essence of nighttime imagery. Liked this very much... Elise |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
A bit of wispy, and twisting midnight flying...Very much enjoyed! Robert Joseph |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . to start at the end. . . if we only could. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thank you for all of your kind words! I just whipped this one up, and left it here because it seemed to want to be free and read. |
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