Open Poetry #12 |
A Written Hug |
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
With scissors made for little hands, And wintergreen smelling paste, Construction paper and doilies, And a pencil so he could erase; He was ready for this important task, And he knew what he wanted to do, He'd work till he got it perfect, This gift, for you know who. Sitting there in his flannel shirt, And after a few false starts, He took those tiny scissors, And made some perfect hearts. Those little hands grabbed a doily, Then dove into the jar of paste, And with a tiny finger, He stuck each heart in place. Lastly he took the pencil, And printed his words with care, A couple of letters backwards, And a kiss he'd drawn on there; He shyly came and sat on my lap, And gave me this valentine, Which simply read "I Love You," "Mom, will you be mine?" And with tears shining in my eyes, My heartstrings felt the tug, From the words of my little buddy, I read a five year olds hug. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOVING THIS.... SO VERY MUCH... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so sweet.......love it....helen |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Bonnie this brought smiles. How warm and wonderful a picture you paint, just vivid. Those are just the sweetest valentines aren't they? awwww |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Oh Bonnie - it takes me back - way back, and those Valentines are in my suitcases of memories....so very precious. Thank you for this gem - so lovingly written and shared! Lary |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ You sent me to the cedar chest with this one ! That 'famous' card from my six year old son - 'Mommy, I love you .... more than - Sabrina !' from Steven *LOL ! Sabrina was the neighbor's DOG ! Now THAT was some kinda love ! ! Thank you for this little jeweled hug ! Delightful to this mommy's heart ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is just so sweet! I'm not a mom yet, but I just love this, I think I'll share it with my mom Take care, Melissa~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--this is precious...treasure the time and save it. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo sweet, Bonnie!!! |
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