Open Poetry #12 |
Peaceful Be |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
" Peaceful Be " Close your eyes peaceful be As cleared mind, drift to sleep Darkness overcome your lone As away your thoughts move from their home Body relax , untight be As muscles let go untied free Heaviness from limbs remove As self in rest yourself you choose Open your heart inflood love Dream good thoughts down above Feel your beating pulse relieve Float with your soul in your self believe See visions unreal, subconscious alive Amaze your mind, as your spirit flies Soaring above your lifely form Looking down await inflood dawn Awake now remember , forget The dreams shared within no regret Move through the day happiness glow until in night your eyes you close |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Now thats a smooth shot of Whiskey... a few more like that and you'll definitely be disturbing the peace |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Very nice descriptive piece, i enjoyed reading it very much, and I must say what a beauty you are gk |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Whiskey...nice to see you posting again...I loved this one...now tell me, how do you get to this peaceful place? |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful write. Very relaxing words. A pleasure to read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiskeyGal~ So good to see you home again. Delightful thoughts in this piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whiskey, soft and sweet. Almost hypnotic. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) What a soft and sweet poem filled with serenity and love. What a wonderful place to come and visit, in which you've taken us through your wonderful words! You have such a beautiful heart, Whiskey, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved the way this flowed Whiskey....a remarkable write! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . I really like this one. . . welcome back btw. . . good to see you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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