Open Poetry #12 |
Tears for the dead |
Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
"Tears For The Dead" Like the briar that tears at the angel's wings Like a nightingale's forgotten song, Like the pale flesh that encased my soul I decay from loneliness, sorrow is my own. Like a tear on porcelain memory Like a kiss on lips that are devoid of life, Like a lover's caress in a tortured dream I awaken dead, crying a silent scream. Like a lonely rose, a forlorn tribute Like the faded beauty in your dying eyes, Like the solitude felt by my murdered hope I feel despair - the chill of a winter storm. Like love lying raped in a twilight grave Like a weeping heart, melancholy's slave, Like the place in my soul where no light will shed I will leave you my crimson tears for the dead. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
wow, this is quite the entrance poem. I loved it and welcome to passions. I hope you decide to stick around so that we can be so fortunate to read your work. Keith every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Heartbreaking, but truly wonderful writing. Welcome! Will look forward to reading more! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GothKitty~ A compelling entrance you've made into the circle of poets and friends of Passions. Welcome. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
Sad, very very sad... you have expressed your sadness extremely well. Welcome to Passions I hope to see more of your work here. WhiteKnight |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, very dark loved it glad you found your way Julie |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Thank you all for your posts to my work gk |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is excellent. . . to shed those tears. . . welcome to Passions my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I echo the same compliments from above.....a very sad and compelling piece......excelllent write too.......and welcome to Passions! Nathan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! This is quite an entrance for a first post! Please check your e-mail for a special message! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very nice work, welcome and hope to see more of you |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very good write! I hope to see more of your work soon. Oh yea and ummmmm welcome to Passion! |
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