Open Poetry #12 |
- Disease - |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A dark poem from a dark heart... Disease Beat me, degrade me, do as you please, I'm at your mercy, I'm on my knees ~*~ Hate me, cut me, suck my worth to tease crucify without nails in cruelest degrees ~*~ Rape me, taint me, strip a heart to freeze, warp the mind, I share your disease *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
What powerful and cutting words. They hit deep within my soul. I'm sending some light your way and I hope that whatever happens to be burdening you lets up quickly. Life is much too short to let anything bother you for too long. "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Im sorry for what ever is troubling you , I hope you find your peace soon, very powerful piece felt it to the core, keep your chin up Julie |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely conveyed the feelings, my friend. Did it well and good...thanks for sharing. jwesley |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A dark poem indeed, Melissa....but not a dark heart. Hugs to ya. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed not a dark heart. . . but a heart full of light. . . powerful words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Sunlit Soul, jwesley, Julie, Elizabeth and Sven for reading this dark poem, and for your support~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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