Open Poetry #12 |
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- Disease - |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA ![]() |
A dark poem from a dark heart... Disease Beat me, degrade me, do as you please, I'm at your mercy, I'm on my knees ~*~ Hate me, cut me, suck my worth to tease crucify without nails in cruelest degrees ~*~ Rape me, taint me, strip a heart to freeze, warp the mind, I share your disease *By Melissa Honeybee* |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
What powerful and cutting words. They hit deep within my soul. I'm sending some light your way and I hope that whatever happens to be burdening you lets up quickly. Life is much too short to let anything bother you for too long. ![]() "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Im sorry for what ever is troubling you , I hope you find your peace soon, very powerful piece felt it to the core, keep your chin up Julie |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely conveyed the feelings, my friend. Did it well and good...thanks for sharing. jwesley |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A dark poem indeed, Melissa....but not a dark heart. Hugs to ya. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed not a dark heart. . . ![]() but a heart full of light. . . powerful words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you Sunlit Soul, jwesley, Julie, Elizabeth and Sven for reading this dark poem, and for your support~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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