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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Could this burden be so sweet when all folly leaves to play That moment, one shared dream which two lovers fear for truth Content to feel small satisfactions that combine to make a whole What proof, tears fall and stain hearts that want freedom This common ground that calls, a field of open plains of hope Entered through a small door set in stone, slowly crumbling How is it then that I love you more so this day than last Finding solice in the strength of my heart begining to beat |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: How indeed does one share this most engulfing feel... well done... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is a beautiful question you have posed, 'how is it that I love you more so this day than last'? Is there ever really an answer?  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Beautiful, thought-provoking poem! Yes, there is not an exact right answer for this question; it's two lovers hearts alone, melted into one, that answer the question themselves. This was beautiful! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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