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Charge of Winter Dawn
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Charge of Winter Dawn |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
The morning rode on moments summoned by the clock while night, aghast at such audacity, still walked. And then the dawn, on crested wing of solar spark, with deadly slash of burnished scythe dismembered dark. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"crested wing of solar spark" I like this. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love your imagery. Beautifully written.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I agree once again with Lone Wolf...lovely imagery....wonderful poem! Nathan |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nice and tightly written, with clear, sharp images! Corinne |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
What a unique way to describe it...I loved the images. Well thought-out and executed, you have great talent!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LaryALee~ What a neat image jumps to mind with a slash of morning across the fleeing of night. Really enjoyed the imagery here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Thank you all - Poeminister, Lone Wolf, Nathan, Corinne, Sunlit Soul, and Marge! I really appreciate your comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Lary |
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