Open Poetry #12 |
EvenSong Of His Love |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The mountains call Your Name as in valleys of Springtime Song. Sweet melodies of Your wonder. A chorus of moonbeams radiate songs of joy to the rising moon and the setting sun rejoices at the EvenSong of the starshine. The Galaxies herald the Archangelic Choir of praise to Your Holy Love, and the earth abounds with song. Ocean to ocean, their mighty depths filled to overflowing with creation, made of Your ever bountiful Hands. Songs of seaward breezes symphony are heard, sweet angelic melodies, that swell to heights of adoration. Why not then, does every man bend his knee to You? A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 02-03-2001).] |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Ellie! Yes, indeed, why don't they? |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Ellie, all I can say is WOW! What a gorgeous psalm you have written here! It reminds me of some of my favorites. Well done! hugs To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is beautiful Ellie. I'm going to put it into my library and want you to submit it to the newsletter when we do our 'nature' themed poetry! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A chorus of moonbeams radiate songs of joy to the rising moon and the setting sun rejoices at the EvenSong of the starshine. The Galaxies herald the Archangelic Choir of praise to Your Holy Love, and the earth abounds with song. Ocean to ocean, their mighty depths filled to overflowing with creation, made of Your ever bountiful Hands. Songs of seaward breezes symphony are heard, sweet angelic melodies, that swell to heights of adoration. Why not then, does every man bend his knee to You? ===================== why indeed ... wonderful writing Ellie... this lovely inspiring piece showcases your gift of imagery and writing natures gifts. and its a joy to see your name here just beautiful poetess!! If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, it is a wonder, isn't it? Beautifully written, ellie! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, This poem just radiates with beautiful efflugence and, as well calculated make one want to just shout out, "Praise God,Praise God!" Very lovely indeed, David |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely verse and I loved the last question, why indeed? "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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