Open Poetry #12 |
Tribute to Jack and Rose (Repost from Dark) |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Tribute to Jack and Rose Drowning in a lifeless sea, With other souless spawned, They too try to stay afloat, Will any of us make it to the dawn? Ship of dreams, ship of fools, Cold forbiding skeleton bulk, Grey water so cold and forbiding, We watch the sinking hulk. Will the heart really go on? For my beloved is lost to me, Only a moment's passion, Not enough for a lifetime or for me. I'd promised him I'd carry on, He knew that I could do it, But without him by my side, Life I don't want any part of it. But I did go on, I rode cowboy styled on the beach, And Jack was there watching, His smile only just out of reach. I married a man and we raised a family, Jack was always there watching over me, I never did love that totally again, But I was happy with my life as it must be. Now back on the ocean once more, Never dreamed I'd see Titanic again, It took me back to those days gone by, Took me back and made me cry. Tonight I shared my Titanic story with others, Now they indeed know there was a Jack Dawson, And how you saved me in every way a person can be saved, But it all brought back so many memories, really turned them on. Tonight I gave it to you Jack, The necklace, 'The Heart of the Ocean', And when I close my eyes to sleep, I will be coming to you. My time here is over, I was lucky to have this last goodbye, To all that we shared, I still miss you, I still cry. When I go to bed I'll dream of you, Back on the mighty Titanic together, Walking down the grande staircase, Arm in arm forever... *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
isis~ this was beautiful. a wonderful tribute to them you have penned. i have watched the "titanic" many times, and while some may think it to be a cheesy movie...i found it a beautiful love story with lots of important lessons. really enjoyed this read! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Isis, I really enjoyed this creative tribute to these two lovers in Titanic! I loved the movie and I love your poem You have some wonderful lines in this ~sighs~ Take care, Melissa |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I remember this one Isis. . . it's as wonderful now as it was then. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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StumperDaBumper Junior Member
since 2000-12-20
Posts 19State of Mind, Compassion USA |
Bumpintine Bumpintine Won't a bump be mighty fine Another trip around the forum cause I think it's awful boring without a little bump or two Here's one from me just for you! Happy Bumpintine! Are we having fun yet? |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Titanic is one of my favorite movies, and this was a wonderful depiction |
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