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Spirit of Love
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Spirit of Love |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Spirit of Love Fragile petals of roses Silky shine of tenderness Fragrance of sweetness In blossom of love Crystal dew on roses Whispered touch of prose Promises of morn glow Showering of love Tidal waves of oceans Soothing gentle emotions Amiable motions Magic of love Depth lake of eyes Volcano of surprise Twinkling delight Spirit of love Charisma |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
Very nice poem, keep writing.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Enjoyed the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so beautiful Charisma ... your gift of imagery shines in these lovely verses of the rose. wonderful work take care jm If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
It was almost as if you were describing that picture, with careful description. Well done. -Jeremy Raulinaitis "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A beautiful description with great imagery! I really enjoyed this Take care, Melissa~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Angel Bee: thank you for your kind words Seymour: so glad that you enjoyed the read, thank you my friend JM: thank you for your lovely comment, its always nice to have them from you Jeremy: thank you for your wonderful reply....I'm glad that you can see the description of love within the rose too... Melissa: thank you my friend, I'm happy that you enjoyed the imagery, love your comments |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Charisma - I adore this! The blend of love and roses is so perfect, and you've fine-tuned the details to produce a glorious bouquet! Simply gorgeous! Lary |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is exquisite, Charisma. "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
laryalee: thank you for your wonderful compliment, and for the gorgeous, I am glad that you love it. Kathleen: thank you for the exquisite... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wanted to make a thread....as these one wasn't show up in my library. |
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shawana Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 14 |
No explaination neccesary... Easy read...easy absorbtion... next!...;-) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Awesome writing, Charisma. Truly beautiful. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do so love reading one of yours as I know that I am always in for a treat and more often than not it will be one filled with the lovely imagery of nature's love in which we all are allowed to enjoy but so many of us don't. This was no exception as you know and I must say it is one of my favorites of yours. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, What a beautiful poem. "Crystal dew on roses Whispered touch of prose Promises of morn glow Showering of love" That was my favorite verse.. just wonderfully written .~~Tara aka rp25 :o) [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 02-04-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Shawana: thank you sistah Lone Wolf: thank you for the awesome Mark: well thank you my friend, I am always happy if you enjoyed the read knowing that you meant everything you said....and I appreciate your comments very highly....and nature is so beautiful and a free gift for us all.....if we treat her well that's why nature is my favourite topic. rosepetals: thank you and I am happy that you enjoyed the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is a gorgeous volcanic eruption of poetic beauty and inspiration, sweet friend, may loves baeauty always swim in your heart and fill you with ecstacy! (kiss on cheek) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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