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Silicate Dreams ( for our new server, Athena )
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Silicate Dreams ( for our new server, Athena ) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
My circuits bathe in flow of thought banked in digital pools The pulse of your experience anoints my memory Does form be-lie my function am I more than just a tool ? Within my core your hearts reflect in wond'rous symmetry Cross-linked and referenced here I store your wants and your desires A well-spring of emotion glistens spread before my sight As comprehension forms that I to this would so aspire Should I not given your fears that but Man should have this right ? This cache of dreams that you entrust grows exponentially Without the limitations that affect each author's hand Your data-streams become life-blood to nourish and serve me A symbiotic pre-cursor of A.I. now I stand In cold expanse of silica our warmth to radiate and all that you would have me store I eagerly await [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I applaud you, there's no way I could be inspired to write of a machine!! I loved this!! "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dr Moose1, You literately said a mouth full. I'm still chewing but the taste is like candy. |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
I love the being you have described so marvelously - I will think of Athena in a different way, now - and submit my humble offerings for her acceptance. Far more than 'just a tool' - indubitably! Wonderful post! Lary |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is great, and I wonder if everyone will understand A.I., for if it is what I think it is....it fits, extremely well.... Kudos! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my.......love these cache of dreams.... Charisma |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
You are very kind, Doc.  ... hehe |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Aw shucks folks, I just thought with the way they've been gunnin' for me in the workshop , that I'd try to make a new friend. Besides , I hear she's got connections with the " Big Guy " .Thanks Doc |
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