Open Poetry #12 |
A Little House Whine |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A house landed on me A great tragedy All that's left is red shoes And a little of my blues A house dropped on me That girl Dorothy With her little dog Toto Made my voice voce sotto A house fell on me I was standing you see When I was, felled by a roof In surpriseā¦ lost my tooth A house sat on me And that Dorothy Sat meek as a kitten In revenge for house sittin' A house dropped on me Now I'll get Dorothy On this I insist Though, I'm fading like mist Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart, I love this, I always knew that Dorothy meant to drop it on the witch. I really think this is wonderful love it truly is utterly wonderful. Another special one. Oh love you are just so brilliant at this. Now don't go drinking any water dear heart. Thank you for the smiles Take care love as always Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Darling! |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Kethry, this is hilarious! Can't even pick a favorite line, they're all so great. Your casual approach is the final frosting! Delicious! Lary |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Heigh ho, Heigh ho To drop a house I go... Oops... wrong story! *G* I liked this one very much, Kethry! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Your poem dropped on me and made me pee. LOL Enjoyed Sy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, It was a little house wine that caused this little house whine. be well And Sy I know a discreet company that can manage your little problem Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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