Open Poetry #12 |
What Have I Done |
Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
WHAT HAVE I DONE Why did I hurt you so What was I thinking When I said I did not care My heart has never known such despair Why did I do the things I did Why was it so hard to say I love you My Heart has never known such despair What I want you to know is that I care What I want you to know is no matter what I love you so My Heart has never know such despair Will I lose you Will you care I’m afraid to ask I do not dare My Heart has never know such despair What will it mean To be apart 11 years together and Now we are alone and apart My heart has never know such despair What mistakes I have made I want to change There is a way I hope and pray To bring us together one day My heart has never known such despair Written By agent696_DS |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Welcome to Passions Agent696_DS Great entrance with powerful words. Really nice piece of work!!! Hope you enjoy your time here. Cheers CD |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome, This is great writing. Keep em coming... jsom |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I did the same thing before...I cared for someone yet I drove them away from me...hard to understand and a bitter pill to swallow if you are not given another chance to prove your love...to reveal the feelings within your heart...James |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice first post piece! WELCOME TO PASSIONS |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Agent696_DS I echo James reply to this one, I wish you the very best, also I would like to welcome you to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay here. Great first post. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
This poem touched me deeply. Loss is hard, always. My thoughts are with you. A much shared grief. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please see your email for as special message. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Agent696_DS, Wow... this poem is fitting my life so well right now. I'm sorry to see you going through what you are.. and I wish you the best of luck. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions. Yes, words are hard to take back. Keep writing...and have peace. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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