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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Loose ends somewhere I don't know where is a ball of string you may not recognize it but it's still the same thing yes, lost it's shape tangled in things you can't escape it is a bumpy ball how could it not be? with the knots and all so, if it's found may not look round please if you have it keep it nicely bound for it's full of many things all those END-betweens some are mine some are yours everyone's are there some put there carelessly some are tightly wound been noticing lately I need to add some too so easily done although not much fun with a little follow through would you look to see if you have it? I know one of you do give me a call I'll come get the ball and later pass it back to you tyingtyingtying yingtyingtyingtyingtying ingtyingtyingtyingtyingtying tyingtyingtyingtyingtyingtying ngtyingtyingtyingtyingtyingtyin gtyingtyingtyingtyingtyingtying ingtyingtyingtyingtyingtying ingtyingtyingtyingtyingt ngtyingtyingtying [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! jsom |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Those cotton-pickin loose ends! Hey, neat idea for a write. A ball of string . . a ball of poems. One more reason we write. Enjoyed this, slick. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great writing about loose ends in life. bernie< !signature--> Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
just...........thank you kraw........so pleased you liked Bern.....thank you yall come back now ya hear? lol helen |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
You put a wonderful spin on this one Helen. Also artistic. Rich |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I read this earlier...? and...must say, I think the edit really tied up the loose ends nicely (wink) |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
Thats really nice i like all the different thoughts that came to mind after reading it. great job |
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Agent696_DS Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33NY, USA |
Thats really nice i like all the different thoughts that came to mind after reading it. great job |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is great.....love the way you presented it.......makes me think of old friends.......  -SEA |
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