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Out Of The Thundering Sun
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Out Of The Thundering Sun |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Out Of The Thundering Sun ~*Marge Tindal*~  Out of the thundering sun they come riding hard across a burnished sky defeated warriors of the past ancient are their tears war cries silenced before the sun was done <~~> gone the day of the man of the thundered sunrise - now questing resting never in their defeat spear now grounded - resounding on the thundered heartbeat of man *Graphic from a painting by Jerome Tiger ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What IS the Indian word for awesome? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sun ... I do believe that its the word MARGE  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is an absolutely stunning poem from you. And they are right, the indian word for awesome is Margie girl, I know that's two words. See not only do my shapes go wonky I can't count either. I'll add it to my bad list. Fabulous work love utterly fabulous, and I love that graphic too. Thank you dear heart for sharing this Take care love Mushy < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 01-28-2001).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Another wonderful piece from you Marge, jealous I am. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thlah-tla-ya-gwa-n-ta (I do not know) But I thank you for wanting to know.  JanetMarie~ Awwww ! I LIKE your translation ! Marsha~ I hold you all close in my heart for your lovely thoughts. JWesley~ Now you ... get inspired ... not jealous ! *Tsu-na-li, (Friends) Gv-ge-yv-hi ! (I love you) Wa-do ! (Thank you) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh Marge, I just love learning about your heritage, what a treat this was! I just don't know what I would do without your uplifting, creative, historical poetry. And the hourglass presentation was clever! The ending was sadly true...well expressed Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I am so glad to see you writing in the spirit of your heritage....it is truly marvelous! This is absolutely spell binding with the painting bringing it to life like magic....BRAVO!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Thank you, honey. I am so very pleased that you enjoy reading of the heritage of a great people. ETHome~ Very special to me that you read and enjoy the very heart of me. I appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved the imagery of the title alone... and? I have given my children new names as well... my son? is called "eats eight eggs" for his astounding appetite for eggs, sunny side up. my daughter? is "watersong" because she simply cannot bathe with singing. and the boyfriend, I call...smile here, "late for supper" and me? I am? "one pissed witch." Hugs to ya mom. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sensational Marge! Simply sensational! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
All I want for Christmas is another case of frames and a larger wall. Now you are going to have to stop this my friend or just help me build an addition to the house. Which is it. Did I mention that with the addition to the house comes nights of sleeping under the stars? Beautiful write my friend and of course it goes without saying that I truely loved it but just in case you didn't know.....just watch the skies tonight. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Marge!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Glad the title caught your eye. EagleOne~ I appreciate your double 'sensational' ... You're such a sweetie. MarkB~ *smiling* broadly here, my love. Denise~ Thank you, friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Wow, Wow, Wow.....The image is beautiful, as are the words.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, Another golden poem from your gifted pen! I am starting a collection from your works. When the world weighs me down, I know I can search through your poems and be blessed, through laughter or tears, it's always a joy to read your poetry. The diversity in your writing style is amazing. Hugs, Deb |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful wording Marge, and such a lovely flow! Tsu-na-li Gv-ge-yv-hi Wa-do It comes full circle my friend ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Beautifully done. Another superb write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Marge....what can I say....this one is stunning....but all your work is fabulous and a treat to read....thanks for sharing. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ I thank you for such a sweet compliment. You know it is taken to heart. Kit~ Awwwww ! Thank you, my friend. Seraphin~ Thank you so very much. Charisma~ I love sharing ... thank you for letting me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
You always write so beautiful! This was a pleasure to read Love the picture too! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Insect~ Thank you so very much for reading and enjoying the beauty in this piece. The artwork of the late Jerome Tiger is greatly admired by many and is revered for the beauty he depicted. I was inspired by his stroke of the spirits in this painting. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ Your words always find a place in my heart to touch.......this goes deep and is so beautiful.......so strong........I love this........and Janet got the translation correct -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You are such a sweetie ! I'm so pleased to share the burning passion of my heritage stories with you and the other wonderful friends here. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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