Open Poetry #12 |
love |
Hardkore Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33San DIego, California |
Passion fuels my love Passion becomes consumed by love Without my love I become passionless ------------------------------------- Glimpses of a future Whose chances are almost never Emotions never know nor shared Only left with the chance To fuel her passions towards others Tormented to watch in the corner Loving her may bring me to lose my heart For it can't handle the loneliness much longer Delisions of her felling the same Curses me to hope and dream I just want to wrap my arms around you And escape to a better place Lost in the love which is you Show me the way And together we will rise Above the rubble of the past |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! I liked this.......I hope to read more from you -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
HK, A tender write of a heart that yearns.... I enjoyed the read and I thank you... ~coco~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so nice !!! I think you write very well........your words are like acid they burn....you have a new fan & welcome to passions...helen |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
tender and passionate poetry. I enjoyed...welcome!!! aloha,Koko Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Hardkore, Wonderful reading here and welcome to passions I hope you enjoy our wonderful little home. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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