Open Poetry #12 |
Did I Ever Tell You? |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Did I ever tell you………………… ~ Your smile melts my heart and to see that smile reach your eyes when you look at me is the end all………be all of warm fuzzies ~ Your laughter makes my sun rise to warm me through my day, and holds me over until I'm in your arms again ~ Your kisses so tender give my mouth reason…………..purpose and intense pleasure ~ Your touch sets my skin on fire be it in a passing caress or one of deep passion the effect is one in the same ~ Your hand in my hair is a weapon no man should posses you still me…………quiet me…………comfort me ~ You are my rock with your strength and courage I am empowered to find, and use my own ~ Your love for me more than I've ever known exceeds every hope…….wish…………dream.....I've ever had ~ Your friendship is the first place I go to everyday and the sanctuary I return to each night ~ Your heart to mine is the greatest gift…………..the sweetest joy the purest and truest love of all my life …………Did I ever tell you? ……………………………let me tell you now ~SEA~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, That is just you, the magic with which you speak your mind is a gift from above. I just love your straightforwardness, beautiful and sensational. More please! Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh Sea-girlie...I never knew... how sweet of you to say all these groovy things about me.... what???? not me??? OH hahaha teehee OK OK... just being silly... very sweet write Sea-gator.. that hubby of yours is your coolest muse.. love the format of this.... yeah,...way cool and groovy If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
SEA - What a beautiful love song! It holds such rippling emotion and the words seem to dance with your feelings....lovely! Lary (Thanks for your comments on Memory *g*) |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
If he doesn't know, especially after this wonderful, tender writing, he just ain't listening!< !signature--> To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn [This message has been edited by kcsgrandma (edited 02-01-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ WARM FUZZIES ??? Warm Fuzzies ??? Did somebody say WaRm FuZzIeS ??? Love it ! Love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
You’re one great reporter Lois! One great reporter! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~ Beautiful words.....with such heartfelt emotions.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Your smile melts my heart and to see that smile reach your eyes when you look at me is the end all………be all of warm fuzzies' 'you still me…………quiet me…………comfort me' Fantastic lines! Beautiful write, SEA! I love it! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, this is Outstanding, absolutely fabulous love as always you knew I'd love this one. Fantastic lines, the whole poem is poetically perfect. Absolutely utterly wonderful Thank you for this love Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh SEA ... what a wonderful way to start my day! This was just lovely, so many lines in this struck me as simply superb. I loved your thoughts in this (and I always sign my family e-mails with warm fuzzies and hugs, lol). I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~ Your heart to mine is the greatest gift…………..the sweetest joy the purest and truest love of all my life ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ With romantic vision you paint a perfect poem! Love this! Deb |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ you are so sweet to me, thank you for that Janet~ I just couldn't keep quiet........had to let you know LOL I never thought of him as my muse, but yes, sometimes he is Lary~ that's very nice of you to say, thank you KCSG~ I think he knows Marge~ Love those warm fuzzies!! Thank you Insect~ Jimmy, you take some fine pictures too LOL thanks GE~ thank you so much Snowpants~ thank you Mushy~ thank you for the sweet reply dear friend Kit~ thank you for that.......those warm fuzzies are pretty special Deb~ thank you very much! -SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another beautiful display of unconditional love Sea..brilliant work! Nathan |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It would be wonderful to feel this way (sigh) "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sea what an effusion of warmhearted love is flowing here ..... love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very very beautiful, and yep, sometimes the things we forget to tell our love are the ones they most need to hear, great poem |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...you have said this so very well...being able to let that special person know just what they do to you...for you...beautiful darlin We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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