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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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HISSSSSSS peering into the eyes of a snake know full well the risk I take engulfed in powers unable to resist resides delicious ecstasy in his kiss thirst for reality in which to partake appetite now wet to cause an ache weakness lost now woven in want granting relief in every taunt mesmerizing powers in which to seize bewitching satisfaction the heart to please a taste to relish and savor with delight hidden in the venom of his bite shall his elixir be liquid cure or is the poison a captivating lure intoxicating potion in bite and stare intriguing fantasy in which to share hypnotized yes, yet in emotional armor he's now met his match in the snake charmer experience teaches death could be in his kiss but I still hear him whisper his longing hisssssss |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooooh....I did like this too.... sssssssssizzled!!!!! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
rrrrowrrr rolling rrr's like Roy O. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Standing O!!!!! kick butt dear. I loved it. Wow wished i had wrote this one. Love and light, Richard |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Hypnotic to say the least. Very well written Helen. Rich |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 This one is on my hot list,,, put it in my library thread.... Great job Helen.  Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Good one! There certainly are some snakes out there over which to be extremely careful.Love the line about him having met his snake charmer, that was delightful! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ty you all ..........im glad you liked this........gotta love that hissssssssss tho.......it will get ya every time LOL helen |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
like this too, very well done, and lol, funny thing I was just writing to a friend about snakes...but the kind you want to avoid, not kiss  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this very much. "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
SSSSSSSSlick, you do like to live on the edge! Nice work! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
One_ slick_lady, One full on poem. riveting from beginning to end, or maybe it was mesmerising. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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