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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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0 posted 2001-01-30 02:24 PM

~Sailing Into Serenity~

Imagine me in your whispers ... feel my presence upon mystic breeze.
Hear my voice calling to you ... my madrigal plea sung across your sea.
Point your sails in my direction ... where the ocean and horizon meet.
My desire to be your compass ... your touch makes me complete.
I could walk on water to reach you ... my need equals the ocean's crest.
Sail on into my safe harbors ... come lay beside me now and rest.
I'll be your port of sanctuary ... I'll be your lighthouse in the storm.
Let my love wash over you ... let my caress keep you warm.
Swim in my uncharted waters ... ride the waves of my liquid desire.
Bathe in undertow of afterglow ... sail the swells of passion we inspire.
Close your eyes and surrender ... this lusty current too strong to fight.
Lay back and breathe me in ... together we'll inhale the night.
My desire as vast as the ocean ... in your depths I wish to drown.
As we ride the tides of pleasure ... waves of ecstasy take us down.
Baptized in your essence ... immersed in your intensity.
Your depths my deliverence ... as we sail into serenity.
Carried by the winds of change ... on this ship named Destiny.
For just one night we'll touch infinite ... come sail upon my sea.

Janet Marie

~Into the Mystic~
~Van Morrison~
From Moondance

We were born before the wind
Also younger than the sun
Ere the bonnie boat was won...
as we sailed into the mystic
Hark, now hear the sailors cry
Smell the sea and feel the sky
Let your soul and spirit fly into the mystic
And when that fog horn blows I will be coming home
And when that fog horn blows I want to hear it
I don't have to fear it
I want to rock your gypsy soul
Just like way back in the days of old
Then magnificently we will float into the mystic
And when that fog horn blows you know I will be coming home
And when thst fog horn whistle blows I got to hear it
I don't have to fear it
I want to rock your gypsy soul
Just like way back in the days of old
And together we will float into the mystic

< !signature-->

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 01-31-2001).]

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

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Michigan

1 posted 2001-01-30 02:30 PM

Wonderful!!!! Absolutely wonderful!!!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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2 posted 2001-01-30 02:30 PM

Just when I thought nobody loved me too...
lol...this is lovely Janet...and I may have send this to a friend (winkie-wink!) The graphics are beautiful...and written with the delicate longing that you pen so well...
love ya lady!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-01-30 03:08 PM

JM,
Your poem exploded all over me and although the grapics are terrific they are pale to the words. I very rarely save poems but this one I will save. Winkiewinkie Stinky

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-01-30 03:27 PM

Will be coming back to read, and read again....well done little one!

bslicker

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state of mind

5 posted 2001-01-30 03:50 PM

Great write Janet Marie.

bernie

Bernie Slicker

snowpants
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KS

6 posted 2001-01-30 05:38 PM

'My desire as vast as the ocean ... in your depths I wish to drown.
As we ride the tides of pleasure ... waves of ecstasy take us down.
Baptized in your essence ... immersed in your intensity.
Your depths my deliverence ... as we sail into serenity.'

I love these lines, JM! This style is great. I hope you don't mind, but I wrote one the other day, which I'll probably post in a little bit, in SORT OF the same style...of course, mine doesn't come close to the images you've given here, but I do enjoy the style. Love it!

sp

Never leave me, never go...
I need you here, I need to know...
You will always be
Close to me

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-01-30 08:37 PM

Jan. . . there are times (this is one of them. . . ) that I just stand in amazement of you and your words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

8 posted 2001-01-30 08:58 PM

Janet the incredible!
Beautiful poem

A very lovely read indeed

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-01-31 12:23 PM

seraphin ..thank you so much for the enthusiatic reply...nice to see your name here again.

hey me twin... you KNOW I always love ya...and i had to smile when ya said "delicate longing".. this 3 am ache moth muse is about as subtle as a train wreck lol...thank you me girlie...you know what gets me raspberry tea muse going

Sweet Sy...you make me fly me with this wonderful reply ...
theres no place Id rather be ... than in your library.
Thank you me winkie stinkie

Bslicker...thank you much for the great reply poet sir.

SP ... of course I dont mind...I saw your poem(...) way cool, and I thank you for finding some inspiration in my work...and for this very kind reply.

Sven ... thank you much for this "amazing" reply ... your words humble me poet sir.

insect...hey groovy bug dude....thank you for the "incredible" reply.

Sunshine..forgive me...I cut and pasted and missed your reply...thank you my poetess...and your eyes are welcome anytime...

thank you all for the kind words
jm< !signature-->

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 01-31-2001).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2001-01-31 12:31 PM

Janet marie~

This is indeed amazing, and how wonderful your images paint the canvas of Serenity....The words of Mr Morrison fit beautifully into this...Just WOW JM.....Be well...

Greeneyes~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2001-01-31 12:45 PM

Janet, Janet, Janet.........I thought I'd never be able to pick a favorite from you as I LOVE all of your poetry........but this one has GOT to be it! So peaceful.......Wonderful my dear friend, I just love this........

-SEA

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2001-01-31 12:51 PM

Jan~

this is awesome! i'm taking a moment to
breathe and remind my heart it can begin
to beat again. this was just so powerful,
so magical. definitely one of my favorites
of yours. the images in this are stunning
but do not even begin to compare to the
awesome writing here!
take care
love ya
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2001-01-31 01:18 AM

Janet--You have magic in your pen, and it has me under its spell...this is superb writing, my friend...I don't have enough words to tell you how.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

14 posted 2001-01-31 05:29 AM

J.M.* Ohhhhhhhhh girlie I have missed your
poetry so very much! Reading this is like
"coming home"...you've always woven with the
wings of your heart and touch mine ever so
softly...this is beautiful sweetie....

Let my love wash over you ... let my caress keep you warm.
Swim in my uncharted waters ... ride the waves of my liquid desire.
Bathe in undertow of afterglow ... sail the swells of passion we inspire.
Close your eyes and surrender ... this lusty current too strong to fight.
Lay back and breathe me in ... together we'll inhale the night.
My desire as vast as the ocean ... in your depths I wish to drown.
As we ride the tides of pleasure ... waves of ecstasy take us down.
Baptized in your essence ... immersed in your intensity.

wow.....you know I'm going to have to read
this in the golden glow tonight

and you
KNOW what the reaction will be...

You weave it like NO other my sweet SS....such a joy to see your poetry here today....Love you~

You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2001-01-31 05:39 AM

Fantastic writing and visuals...James

Mark Bohannan
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Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

16 posted 2001-01-31 06:28 AM

Imagine me in your whispers ... feel my presence upon mystic breeze.
=============================
Point your sails in my direction ... where the ocean and horizon meet.
My desire to be your compass ... your touch makes me complete.
=============================
I'll be your port of sanctuary ... I'll be your lighthouse in the storm.
=============================
Swim in my uncharted waters ... ride the waves of my liquid desire.
Bathe in undertow of afterglow ... sail the swells of passion we inspire.
Close your eyes and surrender ... this lusty current too strong to fight.
Lay back and breathe me in ... together we'll inhale the night.
=============================

Hey JM.............LOOK WHO'S HOME!!!!!
Your MUSE!!

My friend, this is one special poem in many ways and definitely one that will be remembered. First off the topic, now how could you go wrong with that one. Then there is the great intensity in the verse without it being too overwhelming or hard to follow. IT reads great, the split line of course is unmistakably "YOURS" and then the rhyme was perfect. Now about some of those lines............OHHHHHHH never mind.

We will discuss those on the phone.

Nice to see you back with a muse and it looks as if she went to school and came back a scholar.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Kit McCallum

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Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

17 posted 2001-01-31 09:03 AM

"Baptized in your essence ... immersed in your intensity.
Your depths my deliverence ... as we sail into serenity. "

You're making me late for work, LOL ... and I love it! This was outstanding JanetMarie ... beautifully composed and so incredibly visual. Wonderful description, and the graphics compliment this so well ... OK, gotta run gator-girl, thanks for starting my day with such lovely images!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

18 posted 2001-01-31 09:20 AM

GE .. Thank you sweet poetess for the wow and the wonderful reply...yes, I thought Vans song would add to the mood....that is one of my most favs by him..tho its hard to choose...hes soo cool

TY

Sea ... Sea .. Sea ..

... thank you my gator girl ...I had a feeling youd like this one, after all your names in it LOL ....so glad you enjoyed the theme and felt the serene.

Amy-girl ..your replies are whats "awesome" thank you me girlie....me sunshine girlie, ...for all your wonderful commnts of my work ... but ya gotta breathe when ya read

Martie-girl....is that a spell or a curse

LOL ... thank you my sweet poetess ... and your words told me all I need to know ...TY for the magic in your reply

Holly ... thank you me SS ..love that butterfly graphic..way cool

...and thank you for the golden glowing reply ...its about time me moody muse got fired up ...
shes still making me beg for every line these days.love ya too sweets.

SBJ ... thank you poet sir for the fantastic reply...so glad you enjoyed, I guess where you live you get to see such beauty all the time...*sigh* must be nice.

MC ...thank you toots ...those are some of my fav lines too ...and its about time me muse let me write like this again....its been too long ...guess the raspberry tea kicked in huh?

But I dont know about the school part...shed probably cut class and go read poetry in Passions LOL ( dont say it)

and was that "split line" ..
or split mind...LOL...nevermind....we will talk.
TY cowboy for finding this "special"

thanks all for the sweet replies
jm< !signature-->

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 01-31-2001).]

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

19 posted 2001-01-31 09:58 AM

oh..........sigh........oh.......I remember wanting and longing like this......sigh....thank you for taking me back to it

great job on this

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

20 posted 2001-01-31 10:28 AM

OMG OMG THIS IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THREAD I'VE HAD THE PLEASURE TO READ

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!1

Kathleen

Parker
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ON

21 posted 2001-01-31 11:15 AM

Ok, where does the boat moor i'm in. Sure i'll moor in your harbour...

Parker

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2001-01-31 11:52 AM

JanetMarie~
Just lovely, sweet poet.

'Point your sails in my direction ... where the ocean and horizon meet.
My desire to be your compass ... your touch makes me complete.'

*sighing* and *smiling*
Hugs n' stuff~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

23 posted 2001-01-31 02:47 PM

An incredible voyage to such a peaceful destination... WOW! *S* (Forgive me please if I rock the boat... but I absolutely must dance a jig of joy that your muse has returned from vacation.... Whee! Whee! Whee!... SPLASH!... gurgle... oops) *G*

"I could walk on water to reach you ... my need equals the ocean's crest.
Sail on into my safe harbors ... come lay beside me now and rest.
I'll be your port of sanctuary ... I'll be your lighthouse in the storm.
Let my love wash over you ... let my caress keep you warm."

What a wonderful section... it glows with love and warmth... a special part of a superb poem! *S*

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

24 posted 2001-01-31 03:46 PM

Janet,
Beautiful, really really beautiful, am lost for words. Keep writing lady

Maree

Agent696_DS
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since 2001-01-31

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NY, USA

25 posted 2001-01-31 03:54 PM

WOW that was great nice !!!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

26 posted 2001-01-31 07:26 PM

Kit-gator ... ya snuck in on me this morn while I was slooooow left handed typing ..
thank you so much sweet poet for these kind words....and yes...its so unfair that we have to work during poetry time

thanks for starting my day with such a wonderful reply

jelly beans...welcome again and Im pleased you found something here that made you feel that way again even if only in memory. thank you for the kind reply.

Kathleen... oh my...and your are VERY WELCOME...and thank you for such an enthusiastic, beautiful reply...so happy you enjoyed it.

Parker-babes.... you know where....under the ARCH of course

such a silly sweet tease..thanks for reading p-man.

margie-girl ... thank you sweet poet..Im always happy to make you smile and sigh and give hugs and stuff

right back at ya too

Southern .... thank ya my dear... for the superb reply and compliments
..and come on along for the cruise...its the lust boat LOL

DA ... hey girlie....nice to see your name here....and I thank ya ...so glad you enjoyed this...your words were just fine

Agent 696 ... welcome new poet and I thank ya for the great and for stopping by...
nice to meet you.

thank you all for the wondeful replies...
love to poetry land
jm

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

27 posted 2001-01-31 07:45 PM

Janet Marie, thank you for a beautiful and amazing poem. It creates so many feelings.
Hugs, ME

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

28 posted 2001-02-01 02:05 AM

An excellent and beautiful piece Janet...it feels like it could be sung!

Nathan

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