Resplendence of Beauty (A Kiss)

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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-01-30 01:49 PM

I see life
I don’t complain
I see beauty
I won’t abstain
I see bounty
I won’t refrain
I see hunger
starve my brain

My lips are filled with valleys
Your lips are filled with oceans
When we kiss, it’s sealed like this
A splendor of emotions

In youth the kiss is bonded
And from death it’s torn away
From the stage of it’s departure
I look back unto that day

I turn my head
In wakeful bliss
Maybe I
Will die like this
For all my life
I dearly miss
That one true love
My own first kiss

I need lifetimes to enjoy
The passion I had in youth
Never did I think one kiss,
Would show ways to find the truth

The truth is, at the moment
When lips part from a kiss
There slowly becomes a dying
And but time to reminisce

Somewhere in here I was born
Somewhere in here I have died
In there the oceans from your lips
Become tears that I have cried

I see life
I do not feign
I see beauty
Its’ refrain
I see bounty
My champagne
I drink your kiss
Into my brain

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 01-30-2001).]

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

1 posted 2001-01-30 02:01 PM

True beauty!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-01-30 02:06 PM

Yes the beauty of a kiss...James

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2001-01-30 02:41 PM

I like...I like....kisses......the way you weave them through out the ages...very nice writing

laryalee
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since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2001-01-30 02:46 PM

A dramatic painting of thoughts - such a kiss! Especially loved -
"In there the oceans from your lips
Became tears that I have cried"
Marvellous!
Lary

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-01-30 02:53 PM

(sorry walt...think you crashed my computer...lol...no icq..nada!)

and this is beautifully romantic...
battin' eyelashes atchya!

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-01-30 06:17 PM

thank you all i like this one

Temptress

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since 1999-06-15

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Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-01-30 09:45 PM

BEAUTIFUL work, Walt! Everyone should see this!

elisaseyes
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since 1999-07-15

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fort worth texas

8 posted 2001-01-31 07:08 AM

awwwww Walt i love it...

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

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Mississippi coast

9 posted 2001-01-31 07:11 AM

Job well done, for the one you love.
Melton

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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10 posted 2001-01-31 10:38 AM

I loved your definition of a kiss!!!

Kathleen

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

11 posted 2001-01-31 01:10 PM

thank you all recent repliers!

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