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Love's Flow
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Love's Flow |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Zenith and nadir and nexus Loves stream in ebb and flow Is the power that connects us And shows us where to go So we may all become fulfilled And passion's song is barely stilled Nadir and nexus and zenith Love gleans the high and low And gifts a true heart to pen with As pleasures of flesh forego So that love may claim the key That unlocks ancient mystery Nexus and zenith and nadir All blend to steal the show The alpha and the omega Join now to bend the bow Till cupid in his loveless might Will learn of love's serene delight The highs and lows of connection Can make passions overthrow The chance for resurrection That love alone can bestow Until at love's song will I swoon Each morning, night and shining noon. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, this is utterly utterly outstandingly wonderful piece from you. Absolutely brilliant writing love this is one of your best dear heart. Oh how much i love this one. Am I jealous no love, because I know I could never write like this, I'm just grateful that I get the chance to see this beauty. But I shall be holding this to ransom until you send me some of your best phrases. Thank you love this is truly wonderful Take care love as always Slushy  Love you dear heart Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A subject I will now forgo -You've written the last word better than I ever could |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A subject I will now forgo -You've written the last word better than I ever could |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The highs and lows of connection Can make passions overthrow The chance for resurrection That love alone can bestow Until at love's song will I swoon Each morning, night and shining noon. ================= very cool Keth.... love the rhyme scheme in this and the vocabulary is very cool creative and unique .. your pen and muse are still on fire me girlie keep em coming........ which means ....................write on If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha. Thank you, you are a generous individual and your praise amazes me! Wilfred, No! don't say it's so that these words you would forego it was just a little word or two that I borrowed first from you because you wrote, inspired me to take your words and set them free once again within my my write to help to lighten other's night Although I borrowed them, it's clear you must thank Sunshine 'twas her idea. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
JM, me gator mate, praise from you is praise indeed! Thank you so much! BUT the idea of "borrowing words" came from Sunshine. The words came from Wilfred, I just mixed the best. Kethry< !signature--> Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 01-31-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
vandana, thanks Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Kethry, how beautifully and unexpectedly you have used words here! And with them, you express great truth, because love does indeed take us to the heights and the depths. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kethry, Enjoyed reading this sweetie... ~coco~ |
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