Open Poetry #12 |
Connor's Lonliness. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*A Connor and Brianna Poem* Brianna. . . I miss you terribly my heart and I shall always miss you when you're not around. . . Miss your smile, your voice. . . the way that words just come from your heart. . . your soul. . . The hole in my heart needs to be filled by you, by your words and by your love. . . please come to me soon, if only in dreams. . . and I shall be all the more in love with you. . . for you are my only heart, my only kindred. . . Ah, but ours is a love ne'er to be fulfilled my heart. . . but fate is kind and strange, and mayhap one day we shall meet again, and on that day I will hold you close to my heart and to my body and never let you go. . . but until that day, I shall always hold your life and your heart in my heart. . . safe from the cares of the world and from the storms of life. . . I will shield you from the arrows that would steal your life from this plane and caress your spirit with the balm of care from my soul. This I promise to you my heart. . . for you shall always be with me. . . even now, until the end of time. . . and I will always be yours. . . on this plane. . . and on the next. . . All my love. . . always, Connor ------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 01-29-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, that is the ultimate piece I swear that is such a wonder that I am dumbstruck. Oh I truly am totally speechless. Truly awesome. On the understanding that less is more STUNNING Take care love Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Sven!! Denise |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ Oh Wow my friend, if beauty ever existed it's within these words.....it is indeed within these words...... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, the Knight of Night of Write.... is back.... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I'm holding my heart. This is,...um,...YES it's beautiful! Really WoW. *Peace. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A jewel this is PoetFriend... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Marsha love, I do believe that your bias is now showing as well. . . Denise, thank you. . . Greeneyes, you have humbled me with your words. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, he never really left. . . Spitfire, thank you my friend. . . PoetFriend Coco, thank you for reading ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sven--This is beautifully written! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sven may love always be within your reach...James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwww....geez....you're such a romantic... hope you send this loveletter/poem to her... it sounds so very sincere....words any woman would want to hear... well done, sven! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Connor and Brianna's love spans across time and space and will bloom always! Thanks for this Sven another beauty to add to our saga!! My turn now stay tuned.... Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
For those that don't know. . . Connor and Brianna are two characters created by Isis and myself. . . they are a Lord and Lady in early Ireland. . . we've shown parts of them here and in Dark. . . and right now, we're just exploring some of their earlier times. . . we post parts of their story from time to time. . . hope that you enjoy. . . Martie, thank you my friend. . . James, I wish the same for you as well. . . always. . . doreen, I've always been a Romantic. . . it's just a part of me. . . thank you. . . Isis, indeed their story is one for the ages. . . thank you for helping me tell it my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, love of ages weft for me, how lovely. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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