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Rain Dancer
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Rain Dancer |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Let me dance you in rain, arms around my waist, as you lay your head on my shoulder with soft neck kisses, slow hand movements, gentle body sway Let the sound of the waves, and rain harmony, be our peaceful music Let me tell you How sensual you look with the rain on your face, how sensual your mouth feels, brushing tenderly, the wet from my lips, on oceans edge, our own little island, to take us away from the madness of the world Let me sing soft whispers of the Rose in your ear, moving my hands across your body, up to your face, & down again, with gentle touch Man of soft ecstasy release and let go Come dance with me in the rain *** When you love someone You’ll do anything, you'll Do all the crazy things that you Can’t explain...you'll shoot the moon, Put out the sun.... when you love someone Bryan Adams |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
All things dear to my heart........dancing in the rain with my man......by the ocean......*Sigh*  love this truly! -SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
When you write like this - I could read you forever ~S~ (I'm on that beach - in the rain - and happier - than I've ever been ...) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
we can use the umbrellas to catch all the *sighs*  THIS IS ENCHANTING ... very lovely GE ... very cool write If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Ah, how I'd love to be there! What an enchanting, sensual post! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well if I open the window right now, I definitely got the sound effects and your words give me the images quite well. Whew....who can complain about that. Wonderful verse my poet friend. I love the tenderness you put in this and all of your love poems. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A lovely, gentle piece. Very nice. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You're beginning to understand better Greeneyes. . . Wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~ tis all the things I hold close to my heart as well, thank you... your sweet comment means much...Bill~ to be taken back, to enjoy all the times on the beach....it's priceless isnt it...your words I always hold close, thank you... Janet Marie~ Your comments always are inspiring.....no umbrellas needed... kcsgrandma~ thank you for your kind reply, I appreciate you stopping in to read.... Mark~ I swear if ya tell me you live at the beach, ohhhh how jealous I'd be thank you for your words....and the only complaint I have is I dont live on the beach.... VAS~ thank you my friend your replying means much... Sven~ My fellow poetry writer, I thank you for your words always.... Be well all.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I love the sweetness of this poem. I'm forgetting what these moments are like.  Great write. parker |
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