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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
The One Kindred Spirit Looking at you I see the stars Not knowing what it is that I feel. My glances turn to gazes As I admire your beauty unsurpassed. Who are you, O Lovely One And why are you crossing my path of fate? What goodness did my Maker see in me That he should bring you along into my life? You do not realize what you are doing Slowly fitting your consciousness into mine. All the while you draw me to your presence Your thoughts link mine. My love for you is not defined as eros It is something beyond that. It is the merging of affections so great A mere one word can not describe it - should not. I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze And your image moves not from my mind. I realize but one thing of these feelings You are my One Kindred Spirit. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yeppers........there is no explaining the power of a soul-mate. Wonderful read. WELCOME TO PASSIONS and I look forward to reading more from you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Some really nice sentiments here. Welcome! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kindred Spirits....one of my favorite lines...brings to mind...oh, many people, many places, many times... Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message! And..... ENJOY Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
CD, I enjoyed your view on what seems to be a very deep love for one special person!  You've made a wonderful entrance with this piece. Well Done Welcome to Passions...... ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Wow!! Thanks a lot peoples. That was indeed a warm welcome Thanks a lot for the Greeting Card Sunshine - loved it!! The rest of you, once again thanks a lot. Means a lot. Just a small piece of info: I wrote that for all those people out there who KNOW that their love is more than love.Thanks CD |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Who are you, O Lovely One And why are you crossing my path of fate? What goodness did my Maker see in me That he should bring you along into my life? You do not realize what you are doing Slowly fitting your consciousness into mine. All the while you draw me to your presence Your thoughts link mine.' Beautiful first post, CD!! Welcome to Passions! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
"I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze And your image moves not from my mind. I realize but one thing of these feelings You are my One Kindred Spirit." Wonderful Start and welcome Rich |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
CD~ Welcome! Such a beautiful start.......I hope to read more from you -SEA |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
CD~ Awaiting more of your words, this is just beautiful.... Welcome... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My love for you is not defined as eros It is something beyond that. It is the merging of affections so great A mere one word can not describe it - should not. I recognize your voice in the fleeting breeze And your image moves not from my mind. I realize but one thing of these feelings You are my One Kindred Spirit. ==================== very cool write ... Please add my Welcome to the list ..its so nice to meet you CD. you make a great poetic first impression with this well written piece I look forward to reading more of your writing. take care Jm If my slight Muse do please these curious days ... The pain be mine ... but thine shall be the praise. ~Shakespeare~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CD~ Please accept a hearty welcome to Passions. I enjoyed the kindred spirit of oneness embodied in your poetic thoughts. You will find much to enjoy here. WELCOME ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Thanks a lot you guys. It was a great thing to be accepted in such a warm way. Appreciate your replies. I hope too to read all your poems as well - definitely look forward to it!! Cheers, CD |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
loved this CD, I look forward to more, welcome. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
CD...welcome to our world...this is lovely |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi CD, So enjoyed this poetry of yours, wonderful first post and welcome to passions I will be looking forward to more of your work. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions....and I love your entrance.....wonderful expressed will look forward to read more from you Charisma |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh wow!!!!!! Leaves one with a soft sigh of longing. Just lovely. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
gotta love destiny!! this is a wonderful write CD  hugs, g PERFECTION has no CHARACTER... -unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, where is the book store with your poetry in it? Welcome to Passions! Long may you write! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
~Kewl Beanz~ Welecome. A great poem! I can't wait to read more! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Well, I don't know what to say. I think that everyone has said it all. I guess that I can throw in wonderful piece again and tell you how moving it is. Soul Mate pieces always make me feel warm inside. If someone can write that about the one they love maybe someday someone will write like that about me. PPPPPPPUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRFECT!!! Welcome to our home, take your shoes off stay awhile!!! Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Wow!! Thanks a lot you guys - you have no idea how much it means to have my poetry appreciated so much. Forgive me for my absence lately in the forums - school has started again and you all must know how that is...  ONce again thanks a lot all of you. CD |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful entrance you've made... this is beautiful! Welcome! |
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