Open Poetry #12 |
The Opiate Titillate |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rewrite The Opiate Titillate Cornucopias horn is full Three proverbial bags of wool One to pay the lions aim One to stay the power game One to gay the people tame. Lions with an Omni lust Drain cornucopia bust Thirst upon the fate of war Always preach the evermore Lions eat their fill in raw. Futilities disparity There is no coming charity The lions maw is the core Feeds behind a fabled door Doling morphine evermore. Pendenting all of pleasure Shovels time to a measure Rides apocalypse as friend Tossing out the coins of mend Promising a fabled end. For evermore the opiate Is evermore of prussiate. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OK, first one to admit, and willingly, that I had to pull the dictionary out for this one.... and now that I've done that.... all I can say is.... wow.... and I thought MY mind traveled around.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just what I needed! More titillating by opiates....lol You, my friend, are a reliable smile! |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
very cool and I love the title |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Futilities disparity There is no coming charity The lions maw is the core Feeds behind a fabled door Doling morphine evermore. Pendenting all of pleasure Shovels time to a measure Rides apocalypse as friend Tossing out the coins of mend Promising a fabled end. For evermore the opiate Is evermore of prussiate. =================== consider me ... sufficiently... opiated and titillated ... and by your coolness of vocabulary ... I am also satiated. *winkiewinkie* "First Rate" Stinky |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, titillating write, it's a good thing words are NOT the opiate of the mind. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thanks so much for the WOW. *L* Serenity, Always liked to make people smile. Robert, Thanks for the cool. JM, Ok I consider everything you said. Winkiewinkie Love Ya Kethry, Cute comment, thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've a question. . . if words are not the opiate of the mind. . . what is??? Great one Sy. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thank you Sven and as to your question. The opiate of the mind is LOVE. |
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