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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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If I could touch your heart *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Wow! That could be rated PG. Very nice writing. I also like that little quote at the bottom of you page. Mr.Magoo |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Simply beautiful..  KStrokes of ink, words, dreams like Waking mountains make intimate conversations With my shadow From 'Words in the Night' by Jeff Geddes |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When you can find yourself floating in the stars in love but still manage to keep your feet on the ground then you have indeed found a love worth holding on to. Excellent writing as always from your pen. Loved the presentation in it as well and the cadence was nothing short of perfection. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Oh, I like the way you worked this across the waters of the night~ 'drown within your soul like the sea at sunsets as the water meets the horizon Just lovely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know that I loved this one Greeneyes. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this flowed like the ocean waves lauren one of my favorites ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Soothing and sensual--love the flow of this. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "Awaiting welcome light of glory's gold, I search the night to fan salvation's spark." --Claire Brown Bower |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If I could touch your heart drown within your soul like the sea at sunsets as the water meets the horizon, It is your ever changing movement ===================== At night under millions of diamonds I feel your mist ======================== kissing my lips with your harmony, ====================== GE this is pure poetry in motion .. written with your grace for feather light whispers in verse this is a *sigh* just waiting to happen  beautiful write poetess of emerald vision take care jm "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this poem is as near perfect as such a poem can be - it will go to my treasure box |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mr Magoo~ thank you for taking time to read, and respond as nicely as you have.... Severn~I appreciate your comments, thank you... Mark~ Hummm kind friend.....your comments are always so heartfelt....sometimes my words fall short, in what I would like to say...just know you are much appreciated... Marge~ you light up my day with your words...and latley, I have needed that light...thank you much... Sven~ I know now....my friend...thank you... Victoria~ we have been responding to each others poems for awhile now, and still I have a smile when I know you have stopped by.....thanks my friend.... Poeminister~ thank you for stopping by to read....I appreciate that much... Janet Marie~ ~sigh~...my friend....thank you, as Iknow you understand....these words...be well always... Bill~ I just adore you....always a smile...thank you for always being you... It took me awhile to get back here, i have been under the weather so to speak...thank you all really... be well alwaysGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - a beautiful and touching romantic writing you have done. I like this very much. BC |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'feeling your strength lay gently over my mind and settle my feet on solid ground, where once again I find peace standing near you' This is wonderful, greeneyes! I love it! sp Never leave me, never go... I need you here, I need to know... You will always be Close to me |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill Charles~ thank you for responding with such a kind reply.... romantic at heart... snowpants~ thank you for stopping in...and for letting me know you enjoyed my words... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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