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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Sometimes Sometimes the touch of you Just flows on through I feel you here It’s like a spear Piercing me Don’t you see? Just sometimes it’s you Who is my true Sometimes I hear you as a touch Just makes my heart clutch I feel you here And everywhere Right through me Can this really be? Just sometimes it’s your touch Which I need so much Sometimes I can taste your kiss Just loving drinking in this I hold it here inside Don’t let it hide Your lips are wine Kisses taste divine Just sometimes it’s your kiss Which makes me feel this Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I feel like sighing after reading this Marsha.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, I would say there is something about this that I like. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Wynter love thank you, this is me trying something else new. A quieter pace for me I think. Thank you muchly Take care love Mushy  Seymour, thank you so very muchly, and I really do appreciate it. I'm pleased you like this one. Thank you truly Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love it Marsha..I like the new you also haa. and i like the form too...  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes you just reach in and grab my heart with your lovely words |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Victoria love thank you, very muchly, this is as I said just me having a little play about. And I'm pleased it pleased you it is good for me to stretch although I think this was more in the way of a wing flap. Thank you love I do appreciate it truly Take care love Mushy Paula dear heart, thank you, love but you know you are awfully biased love. Incredibly faithful and a fabulous friend but biased. And I love you for it always. Thank you as always love Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know that I love this one don't you Marsha??? it's always good to stretch yourself. . . and you've done here wonderfully. . . great job!! ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful writing Marge...wonderful poem! Nathan |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Uh Oh....Look out! Nate thinks Marsha is Marge..... is that getting good? or what!? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
There is much power in a kiss and you have shown that well here. Beautiful write and loved the style. Keep stretching.....it is showing new wonders in your poetry. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marsha - you may write love poems to me any ole time you like. I did like this one very much. BC |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven dear heart, thanks love but your bias is showing again. It really was just me playing with shapes you know love, but I shall say thank you anyway because I do value you love truly. Take care love Mushy Nate love, thank you, I know it was a slip of the finger. I shall only ever have Margie girls magic when she sprinkles it on me. Thank you muchly Take care love Mushy Kari love, don't tease the poor boy, he probably saw it wasn't wonky and thought it couldn't be mine. Thank you dear heart, and it's thanks to something you said that this appeared. See how I'll swipe anything, just don't leave the good stuff lying about. Take care love as always Majestic Marsha Mark my friend, this was really not so much a stretch as a ruffle of my feathers. To get a stretch out of me Kari has to threaten me to take the sunshine away and Margie girl beats me up. But when I do stretch it is good for me. (But I don't like them to think I'm having too much fun, otherwise they expect me to always work) Thank you muchly Take care love Mushy Bill love, thank you that is a compliment that I don't deserve, but I do thank you for it anyway. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Vandana, thank you love, I'm pleased you did Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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