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Wordly Sonnet |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Wordly Sonnet I want more than to rhyme with strife a moment that encompasses life and some way more to rhyme with give to find such a word is one "why" I live perhaps one day I shall find a rhyme that takes in all, and wraps in kind those thoughts that ramble in my mind in which some memories would then bind for this feeling, far beyond the passion to seek the lift and give it fashion no, I will not let a dictionary ration this thinking gray, nor cease sensation but to give one new word, a unique creation and bring it forth in culmination 01.27.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
very nice work Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is one of your best it really is. You definitely suit sonnets love, but then there's nothing that you don't suit, because you can do everything. Absolutely first class, mega beautiful. I love this one dear heart Take care love as always Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This one sings Karilea It's got it all rhyme, meter and thoughts from you have culminated  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to be read and savored. . . like right now. . . again, it's Sonnet Monday. . . wonderful Sunshine. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sonnets suit you! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine- Capitally written. You craft these Sonnet beautifully. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I love the rhyme scheme....brilliant work! Nathan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A fun write to read...I enjoyed *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lovely as the poet who wrote it...a gentle read, as always...I'll bet you sing lullabyes too.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all, very much....and serenity? I use to...now....just in my dreams...and to my grandchildren....but...I can't carry a note in a bucket...so I'm glad the grandchildren have a lot of patience... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
despite what you say - I agree with Serenity - expect to hve a lullaby soon ~S~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, A sonnet, a sonnet to go with your bonnet that's looking quite blue in search of the light of you write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, Ok...I'm working on a lullabye....but everybody better get their earplugs ready....I'm warning you!....trust me....I know what I'm talking about!....LOL.... |
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