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Talking, Balking
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Talking, Balking |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Talking, Balking if not so shy yes I am I would talk with you 'tho I balk but won't walk apart from you no, I'd just hie away this shy away if I could so I write what I cannot speak however, you must know, my tongue is not in my cheek for these words that I would speak must be wrote every note just so you can see see? that this, this love would speak oh, so loud you could hear it above the crowd but it comes out in whispers all I can do is sit at your knee looking to please you please all I can do is take you up in hazelgreen eyes for I know enough to look at you but you your presence alone closes my throat and I find it hard in the eyes of you to speak the words that I want to so forgive me please if I don't talk forgive the balk of me I will just sit quietly and listen to the you of me I will take in quietly all that you would say, or see in this knowing of the I love you of thee as you talk undeviatingly to me my smile is personally yours as is all this shy of me and ask that you never hie away the love of me 01.27.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, I would never hie away the love of you. No matter when no matter where it blew. You are a delight of my day and my night. I knew that even before your smile and sight. For I am one of the many that love you. *L* Sy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is truly awesome dear heart, so perfectly written, absolutely beautiful Kari love. Yes I love it, I know I should leave a blank space, but if I did would you know that I had been and sipped your beauty. Drank it into my soul, no I don't think you would. You might hear me as I sat there, but you wouldn't see me. So I make sure that I leave a trace of me behind. Wonderful work dear heart Take care kid love Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved this, let's bump this up again! Kathleen |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, where's that blushing little smiley face when I need it...oh well...{~,^} thank you, my friend... Marsha, you trace all over this place, and we love it, and you know it....trace away my dear...and thanks for taking a moment to read... Irish...so glad you enjoyed this...thank you for the BTTT... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
How did I miss this? Oh my oh my - Karilea - I don't know how you do it - ( it really spoke to me ~S~) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Karilea, what a lovely loving piece you penned here....love these tender write. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you can walk the walk AND talk the talk!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, trust me, I don't know that I do do it, but if I did...then I have to take your word for it!...thank you... Charisma...love to have you read...thank you... 'Deer...that Sir...is all in your imagination...I am more the stumble, fumble type...LOL...thank you!... |
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