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Thou Kiss.... (a small poetry recital)
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Thou Kiss.... (a small poetry recital) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 01-27-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow. It really helps to hear a poem read...brings it life... you have a nice way of reading it too  K |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
great read Parker if you know what I mean! I loved the poem too! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With lips of red and ruby gleam Where passion flows a warmth in me ====================== Whose lips do sing of subtle pleasures And delight my dreams, with lusty treasure So rich with touch and passions spent My morning glows with your smile sent Thou kiss is life, to all my wants and needs But, one I say is not enough, its not enough for me ======================= very very cool P-man ... love the longing and passion in this beautiful,romantic poem. love the way you put out those p's and lay down those s's  smooth as spun silk ... if your not careful ..your gonna become a flame ... ROTFL  excellence from your poets pen once again "she calls me baby ... she calls everybody baaaaby". ~jc mellencamp~ ;) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very pretty....Parker...lovely! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WHOA! quite an exchange of gifts in this poem... and i love the way you..sort of..whisper...that word..'passion'.. all for you baby..all those kisses for you! (i have a feeling you'll get a WHOLE bunch of kiss offers!!  ) hugs, g"i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to the point where we would think so..." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Excellent poem and a most wonderful read there sir. I folded this one down to let it load and reopened Passions to another poem thinking I would have time to read a few and reply before it loaded. Well, I managed to get one read and replied to it and it was short so the loading was MUCH faster than the first one. Just thought you would like to know. I count maybe 3 or 4 minutes at tops to load. Back to the poem........ This tenderness of this is truely wonderful and it is true of course that the power of a kiss can and most often does capture the essence and the devotion of the heart. Great write as usual sir. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Haleyja, Enjoyed the read very nice. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have to agree Parker...when you find the kiss you like...one is never enough...James |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Severn, thank you... just takes a few good drinks...lol ethome, thank bud. Janet, flame sounds good... I need the heat up here. Sunshine, thank you dear. dg, well one from you too well I do love kiss offers. Mark, thanks for the kind remarks... and your timing test... If I compress the voice file anymore the quality goes right to pot. Seymour, thank you kind sir. James, yes too true... one is never ever enough.. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I'm liking this recital pieces you are coming up with. But what I want to know is...can you stand on your head and rub your tummy backwards while doing these??? Just a thought... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, .... rofl.. yes and no hands either.. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
No hands?? And where exactly would THEY be? You knew I couldn't resist that!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Parker how beautiful...this is such a wonderful way of presenting your poem...love the voice sugar We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, I'll never tell... Paula, thank you honey. Parker |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Parker any woman would swoon to this, just not one kiss but many more, how exquisite you say these lines, I agree with you it all starts with just one simple kiss. Remarkably light headed from the sweet poem, excellent. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Another sweet one, Park. Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rosebud1229, thank you very much for your words. I'm glad you lightheadedly enjoyed this. Corinne, thank you sweet poet... Parker |
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Mario Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 21Ireland |
Enjoyed this Parker. Hope the kilt is still working out OK ! Mario. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you for a wonderful read....you have a kilt? Kathleen |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Another beautiful recital from you, James! Love it! sp 'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Your voice is so warm and inviting........I just love when you read to me..........  .........Beautifully done sweetie. -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Mario, thanks for the reply. and yes the kilt's working fine. Kathleen, of course... snowpants, thank you very much. SEA, I was whispering into your ear... all for you. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great poem! Nice to hear one for a change! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
just a test for the new green folder.... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Whisper in my ear the song of love's bliss, only improving but with one sweet kiss. Take me to heaven on the wings of joy, or doom me to hell without you, cowboy.  I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dee, see I knew you were teasing me. I just love it. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Me? Tease? Never!  You would have to be the tease Hon. I'm still waiting for your rendition of Lace. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
test [This message has been edited by Parker (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Fixed the link... hope it works |
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