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Parker
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0 posted 2001-01-27 04:05 AM


This recited poem is very small so it should
not take too long to load..
Turn Up Your Volume

Thou Kiss

With lips of red and ruby gleam
Where passion flows a warmth in me
And I would freeze without their touch
So cold and sad, Oh woe is me

Whose lips do sing of subtle pleasures
And delight my dreams, with lusty treasure
So rich with touch and passions spent
My morning glows with your smile sent

Thou kiss is life, to all my wants and needs
But, one I say is not enough, its not enough for me
So give them all, please give them all to me
And I will give my heart, I will give my heart to thee.

James Parker Haley   Jan 26, 2001

If this mp3 wont play download it here.
http://www.asylumcafe.com/thoukiss.mp3






[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 01-27-2001).]

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Severn
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1 posted 2001-01-27 05:06 AM


Wow.

It really helps to hear a poem read...brings it life...

you have a nice way of reading it too

K

ethome
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2 posted 2001-01-27 06:16 AM


great read Parker if you know what I mean! I loved the poem too!
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-01-27 07:05 AM


With lips of red and ruby gleam
Where passion flows a warmth in me
======================
Whose lips do sing of subtle pleasures
And delight my dreams, with lusty treasure
So rich with touch and passions spent
My morning glows with your smile sent

Thou kiss is life, to all my wants and needs
But, one I say is not enough, its not enough for me
=======================

very very cool P-man ...
love the longing and passion in this beautiful,romantic poem.
love the way you put out those p's
and lay down those s's  
smooth as spun silk ...
if your not careful ..your gonna become a flame ... ROTFL    
excellence from your poets pen once again


"she calls me baby ...
she calls everybody baaaaby".
~jc mellencamp~ ;)


Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-01-27 07:12 AM


Very pretty....Parker...lovely!
dgvarner
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5 posted 2001-01-27 10:45 AM


WHOA!  quite an exchange of gifts in this poem...    

and i love the way you..sort of..whisper...that word..'passion'..  

all for you baby..all those kisses for you! (i have a feeling you'll get a WHOLE bunch of kiss offers!!   )

  hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."


Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2001-01-27 10:48 AM


Excellent poem and a most wonderful read there sir.  I folded this one down to let it load and reopened Passions to another poem thinking I would have time to read a few and reply before it loaded.  Well, I managed to get one read and replied to it and it was short so the loading was MUCH faster than the first one.  Just thought you would like to know.  I count maybe 3 or 4 minutes at tops to load.  Back to the poem........

This tenderness of this is truely wonderful and it is true of course that the power of a kiss can and most often does capture the essence and the devotion of the heart.  Great write as usual sir.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2001-01-27 11:03 AM


Haleyja,
Enjoyed the read very nice.

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-01-27 12:43 PM


I have to agree Parker...when you find the kiss you like...one is never enough...James
Parker
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9 posted 2001-01-27 01:37 PM


Severn, thank you... just takes a few good drinks...lol

ethome, thank bud.  

Janet, flame sounds good... I need the heat up here.  

Sunshine, thank you dear.  

dg, well one from you too   well I do love kiss offers.  

Mark, thanks for the kind remarks... and your timing test... If I compress the voice file anymore the quality goes right to pot.  

Seymour, thank you kind sir.  

James, yes too true... one is never ever enough..  

Parker

Marina
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10 posted 2001-01-28 10:44 AM


I'm liking this recital pieces you are coming up with.  But what I want to know is...can you stand on your head and rub your tummy backwards while doing these???  


Just a thought...

Marina




It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Parker
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11 posted 2001-01-29 11:35 AM


Marina, .... rofl.. yes and no hands either..  

Parker

Marina
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12 posted 2001-01-29 12:43 PM


No hands??

And where exactly would THEY be?  

You knew I couldn't resist that!!

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



Paula Finn
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13 posted 2001-01-29 01:37 PM


Oh Parker how beautiful...this is such a wonderful way of presenting your poem...love the voice sugar

We all have wings...some of us don't know why


Parker
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14 posted 2001-01-30 11:27 AM


Marina, I'll never tell...  

Paula, thank you honey.  

Parker

Rosebud1229
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15 posted 2001-01-30 12:38 PM


Parker any woman would swoon to this, just not one kiss but many more, how exquisite you say these lines, I agree with you it all starts with just one simple kiss. Remarkably light headed from the sweet poem, excellent.
Corinne
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16 posted 2001-01-30 03:09 PM


Another sweet one, Park.

Cor

Parker
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17 posted 2001-01-31 11:47 AM


Rosebud1229, thank you very much for your words. I'm glad you lightheadedly enjoyed this.  

Corinne, thank you sweet poet...  

Parker

Mario
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18 posted 2001-01-31 02:19 PM


Enjoyed this Parker.

Hope the kilt is still working out OK !

Mario.

Irish Rose
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19 posted 2001-01-31 05:44 PM


Thank you for a wonderful read....you have a kilt?  

Kathleen



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20 posted 2001-01-31 07:17 PM


Another beautiful recital from you, James!  Love it!

sp  

'cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heaven's door and listen to you breathing...

SEA
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21 posted 2001-02-01 03:36 AM


Parker~   Your voice is so warm and inviting........I just love when you read to me.......... .........Beautifully done sweetie.   -SEA
Parker
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22 posted 2001-02-02 02:40 AM


Mario, thanks for the reply. and yes the kilt's working fine.  

Kathleen, of course...  

snowpants, thank you very much.  

SEA, I was whispering into your ear... all for you.  
Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-02-2001).]

insect
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23 posted 2001-02-03 12:15 PM


Great poem!
Nice to hear one for a change!

Parker
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24 posted 2001-02-13 03:55 PM


just a test for the new green folder....
Dee
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25 posted 2001-03-25 05:50 PM


Whisper in my ear
the song of love's bliss,
only improving
but with one sweet kiss.
Take me to heaven
on the wings of joy,
or doom me to hell
without you, cowboy.

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Parker
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26 posted 2001-03-26 03:09 AM


Dee, see I knew you were teasing me. I just love it.

Parker

Dee
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27 posted 2001-03-26 09:12 AM


Me? Tease? Never!

You would have to be the tease Hon. I'm still waiting for your rendition of Lace.

Parker
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28 posted 2001-07-30 01:53 AM


test

[This message has been edited by Parker (edited 07-30-2001).]

Parker
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29 posted 2005-11-24 02:09 AM


Fixed the link... hope it works
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