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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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on solid ground I'm sliding verticly straight I lean pulled forward by my emotions by a force that can't be seen and if I close my eyes I'm sliding into a world I never knew lost in a whirlwind of thoughts I find myself with you tumbling farther and farther down into your world I slide getting carried away by your dreams where you have no place to hide so in the darkness I'll find you and these chains will set you free I'll cast away the sorrow and shine so you can see but as for now I'm sliding down a path that leads to you I don't know where I'm going and I don't know what to do but I know that I am sliding sliding every day just a little further with every word you say "There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain when I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I cou |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
desperado......this is so beautiful.....sooooooooooooo romantic!!! helen |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow... wow. I love it. That girl is very lucky, and I hope she knows it. (Something tells me she does) Beautiful. "...but I know that I am sliding sliding every day just a little further with every word you say..." "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Angel_of_Music Junior Member
since 1999-07-25
Posts 35Sanger, TX USA |
I know I know...but I couldn't help it. I just had to reply. Here's a toast from one slider to the next. "In sleep he sang to me...in dreams he came...that voice which calls to me, and speaks my name..." |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
So Des....lol, how've ya been? Its been entirely too long, y 'know... Great rhythm and incredible thoughts..................................................as always. lol |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey des... this is a good'n... Very nicely done, my friend.. You even dragged MI out of hte woodwork here... (Your title, no doubt)... Just keep bein' haved, dear one...  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: i love those lines, des! but i tell you.... the title... the title is FABULOUS and really got MY attention... *grin nice write, dude |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Wonder description of the pull women have Des. Great poem Rich |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Don't mind me...just adding to my library... "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
thanks for all the comments. helen - I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. sax - well if she doesn't know it by now, I'll have to email (or even mail) her a brick. hehe AOM - aren't you a cousin to AOL? MI - hehe I'm doing alright there bud. you are right though, it has been entirely too long. perhaps next time I'm up your way I can drop by for a few hours and we can hang out or something. thanks for the compliments phillip, hope all is going good for you as well. nan - thanks nan. I didn't think this would do the trick personnally, but then again, I have been proven wrong before. hehe doreen - I have to admit, those last few lines blow me away. yet the title was something that took me a while to figure out. damn things never seem to work for me. rich - thanks. just trying to say how it can be when it's true. sax - since when have you ever minded? you oughta be spanked. |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Bully.  As far as the brick...well,...maybe I should just stop there before I get myself in trouble lol NOT That you scare me heh heh "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....I am sliding too... love it... Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ok..well..you know...the title..well..heh heh ... of course thats what drew me in!!  but you done good desperado  wonderful poem..she is quite the lucky lady..hugs, g operator,could you help me place this call,i cant read the number that you just gave me..theres something in my eye..you know, it happens every time.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
the title alone was enough to make me smile Kathleen |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
thanx for replying to my poem. of course at the time I'm typing this I have no idea what you typed, but I figure something is better than nothing. maybe in a day or two I'll be able to read it. till then. thanks for stopping by. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ok, so the title made me step inside......but when I got here.......ya made me *sigh*.....I really liked this -SEA |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Ok, so I guess my question would be, if two people are sliding...won't they collide? And if they do, does it hurt or feel completely wonderful? Why don't you find out and let me know "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
sax- be careful, I can still send you that brick. charisma - glad you enjoyed it. dg - you know, I didn't even think about the title being the way it is. lol but I'd like to thank you for the words just as well. perhaps next time I write something the title won't lead you astray. kathleen - glad to know that at least one thing brightened your day. hopefully there are and will be many more... SEA - I know what you mean. this one made me feel just as relaxed/elated. sax- now that is a question to be answered. as for finding out, do you want me to run on out and find that answer for you? or should I wait till it happens? a most interesting question indeed... hmmm well I think I'm gonna love this field exercise. I'm out in the field right now, and we still have internet. lol only thing is I don't have all those wonderful talk things so I'm kinda lonely right now. catch ya later gator. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, des!!! Love does give you that wonderful "I'm not in control of this and sure hope I don't crash" type of ride. *S* Well done! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
solid ground can be so liquid at times. this was great des, as usual you have not lost yer flair..oh and I just realised that I've known you for what? almost 3 yrs! OMG! Yer not the *baby* anymore *hugs* ~Heather A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life to be thankful for a good one. Mae West (1892-1980) |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
lol, don't you love how I can't just let your poems fade gracefully into the archives? As far as the brick...didn't you say one time that you were too lazy to mail me anything? heh heh heh At first I was gonna say run on out and find the answer. But then I got to thinking about that. Frankly, I don't want you "running" into anyone else, so just wait till it happens and THEN let me know. Glad you still have the net, at least we can talk in here, or something. Although it's kinda like talking on speaker phone, cause everyone can read it. That's alright. I'm kinda lonely too...without you here, I don't have anyone to verbally abuse. Talk to ya later luv."Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
suthern - thanks, but I thought it was "I'm not in control of this and don't want to fight it cause it's a wonderful ride" kind of mentallity.... hmmm heather - IT'S BEEN THAT LONG??!?!??!!!! OMG!!! I'm older than I thought! where is that baby lotion at when I need it the most?? LOL *wink* sax - THANKS!! I feel completely appreciated now. If I wanted that kind of abuse, I'd get on the internet and talk to you.... ummm errr I forgot. I already do. ummm oops? LOL |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
So, I'm sitting here at the computer like always, wondering what the heck to do now that I'm not occupied with you. Wrote some poems, and then replied to every thing I could find. My friends are trying to get me drunk again. But, I'm being a good girl. (be quiet, I don't want to hear anything from you lol) Miss you love. Feel free to reply to your own poem again. lol I'll be watching Actually, I'm back again, and it's like midnight here and I'm tired. Have a long weekend ahead of me, so I'm going to go to sleep now. Have a good weekend, ok love? Talk to you Sunday (Monday for you) *h&k* "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." [This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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