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Sunshine
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Aurora in Phases < !signature--> Aurora go before, go before and know ye, the terminology of Aurora goddess of the dawn, go ye before and know the yawn of mystery, known of the stars, that then encircle ye and know that she, O but she, brought on the winds to sea…… out spread of fingers, rose of glow in the light of morn seek ye all that would, shall be, and could then yet be born for like is it then in this the cup of thee, and morning dew the youth of which if proper, then belongs to you…. Aurora  thy swiftest of light enter into this my soul into an aura of brilliance, to gleam, then to glow for the Sun has risen, and in northern lights, behold that which images are replete, go forth then in gold  but stop now, nay! yet ye go on forth to seek peace in those vast reaches of the north Aurora! I call thee….tho once ye be the dawn of Sun I call to thee, I call….and yet as a whisp of ye, be gone…  in my search, in my search, I see thee, O beguiling one Aurora, I would be thee….for thee seekest but one in thy grip of thy search, to seek the love that's gone but for a moment's brilliance, then to wander on…. O Aurora….I would seek thee in all of circumspect this homage I would pay thee, in all of greatest respect for the light of thee, the light, that I would give to one traverses all jet streams, only to worship the Sun… trust, and treasures, would be only retrospect in cameo I've given, that which would reflect one love, one love, that which might only be…. if my love, this one true love, saw the heart of me…. 01.26.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Karilea, you have given my senses a rare treat...such beauty of words and light...thank you! |
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Sunshine
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Martie, you are more than welcome! Thank you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, I had to search for this, and was it worth it, Oh love this has got to be the best. Didn't I say you had moved your poetry to a new level, it is truly wonderful dear heart. Outstanding love absolutely first class work. Thank you love, this is in my library Take care love Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Marsha, you and Puck have me going more and more into the legends and myths, gods and goddesses of a bygone age... and I thank YOU for this! |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A lovely visage indeed - and enhanced by some very lovely words... This is wonderful, Kari..  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! You used perfect graphics, this poem was phenomenally penned and so creative, my senses took flight in the colours of your words... Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Sunshine
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From Nan "visage"... from Melybee "phenomenal"... wow...thank you... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Aurora ... the very name is beauty, isn't it ? You've given brilliance the light. Can't begin to describe the thoughts running through my head ... Suffice it to say - *sighing* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This glows with such warmth that even the blind should see  lovely pics too |
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Sunshine
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Marge, if I can render YOU speechless...then maybe someday I shall be a poet...Hugs, and thanks.... Rex, it ALWAYS pleases me when you take time to read....almost as much as it pleases me when you WRITE....hugs, you!... |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh WOW Karilea ~ oh wow..... Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Bonnie...hey...you sound excited! Thank you!... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful graphics, beautiful words, beautiful setting, beautiful spiritual thoughts and such a talent to put it all together....yessiree!! This is sooooo good! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine- Love this, and the way you presented it, images are always a treat. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunshine
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Ethome, Poeminister, I had occasion to look this up....and found your lovely responses....thank you so very much! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
it is said a picture is worth a 1000 words - - then truly we've 1000's of words PLUS your exceptuional poem - I'm in total awe - I've seen the Northern Lights but once in real life - I think I was about 7 years old - Nothing to compare to these photographs - AND - my poor poem of today 3/1/01 - truly pathetic in comparison - This TO MY TREASURE BOX! |
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Sunshine
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Mr. Yeats...what a kind comment, and thank you so much for digging this up from the deep blue pages where ancient treasures lie... |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I Mucha like your art nouveau style (sorry for the pun)and your stunning imagery and words. Mucha enjoyed. Thank you Regards, Olias. |
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Sunshine
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Olias, thank you very much for your kind comments...glad you liked the whole enchilada... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My...my...I have seen the Northern Lights, and my dear lady you had captured them without the pictures. If this is a new venue for you as I notice by the comments, trust me you are on a roll! This was stunning, in presentation, visual imagery, and my mind's eye did travel far to the reaches of the lights of the soul, thank you for a truly exception piece of poetry. ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ |
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