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song of my heart
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song of my heart |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Gallery Reading Room song of my heart I know you're out there the notes of your life coming together measure by measure in the key of life your heart beating time through the rhythm of your years you have played before many hoping to find one whose song is in harmony with yours the counterpoint of their life joining yours seamlessly in a sonata of love song of my heart I know you're out there looking for that one song but instead of looking for another song, how about looking for words to your own song? let me put my poetry to your melody coming together in a song of love because what's a song without words? ---------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A song without words...not much...great job here Sven. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* words to music how perfect would be the love that could do this. *sigh* this was so soft and beautiful. I can see your heart is full of incredible love songs. *sigh* wonderful. I so love your writing. You write with heart and truth making your words sing into the heart of the reader. Wonderful, wonderful. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* words to music how perfect would be the love that could do this. *sigh* this was so soft and beautiful. I can see your heart is full of incredible love songs. *sigh* wonderful. I so love your writing. You write with heart and truth making your words sing into the heart of the reader. Wonderful, wonderful. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven , you are the words and music. Play on! Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven, this is wondrous and excellant, Kethry is right you are the words and the music. This is a fabulous write from you. I love this one Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Romance returns.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful song, Sven.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sven, Lovely write. Enjoyed this muchly. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven~ this is so beautiful and lovely! full of the heart we all have come to know and been so graced with. simply wonderful my friend...take care. ~amy~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ My friend a most beautiful piece you have penned and what true words a song is not a song without words....lovely!!! ~HUG~ Tracie~ P.S I have so much to catch up on but I hope to tonight, I'm straight to your gallery now Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all my friends. . . indeed a song without words is but just a song. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You write the words, for out there someone is waiting to put it to music. Beautiful words you do write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoy it a lot |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Just reading your words, always puts a song in my heart... Beautiful! Much love, Elise |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
sven: i dig your words! you give me reason to want to learn more. what's a song without words? sometimes (especially in love) there is a time for silence, and this can be a song complete in itself. or, as noah benshea says, "it's the space between the notes that makes the music." |
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