Open Poetry #11 |
I Am (Challenge) |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I am a woman who loves life... Spritual, whimsical, and young at heart. . I wonder at all the beauty there is. I hear fairy songs. I see delight everywhere. I want love to prevail. I am a woman who loves life... Spritual, whimsical, and young at heart. I pretend to be a child again. I feel the joy of spring in winter. I touch flowers in the snow. I worry that I don't pray enough. I cry at extraordinary kindness. I am a woman who loves life... Spiritual, whimsical, and young at heart. I understand that love is all that matters. I say God is my first Love. I dream of gardens of roses. I try to be more loving each day. I hope for the very best Love for my children. I am a woman who loves life... Spritual, whimsical, and young at heart. Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart. Joseph Fort Newton |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You did this wonderfully. Enjoyed the read.. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully done..very lovely indeed... ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cry at extraordinary kindness. =================== I understand that love is all that matters. I say God is my first Love. I dream of gardens of roses. I try to be more loving each day. I hope for the very best Love for my children. ==================== I am smiling so big seeing your name here and that you did the challenge.. and YES this is a sincere and true portrait of the sweet Ellie I have been lucky enough to know, very well done dear poet take care jm |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I knew it would turn out beautiful, just like the one who penned it, I just didn't know how beautiful! Ellie, this is so fantastic- so self-revealing,so true to the person whom you have revealed to me in the course of our dear friendship--I'm glad I for one, encouraged you to take the challenge--I know others will see more clearly the beautiful person I have come to admire & appreciate so much. God bless you my lovely Friend, David |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Ellie ... this is so lovely! What a beautiful, loving and spirit-filled poem you have penned for this challenge. You have a wonderful heart, and it shines through your words! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie, sweet friend~ You just did such a wonderful job of showcasing YOU ! 'I am a woman who loves life... Spiritual, whimsical, and young at heart.' I'd know you anywhere ! Love n' Hugs ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Ellie, You are a person who delights in mystic and magical wonder, the granduer of the beauty of nature, all the while grounded in the Love and Grace of God. You bring to the Passions forums a wonderful, unique perspective and we are All blessed by your sharing here. Peace unto you my Sister. Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This is so touching. I feel privileged just to be able to read it. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~I am a woman who loves life... Spritual, whimsical, and young at heart.~ ellie~ From all your poetry I have read, I would say this is indeed you... A very tenderhearted person. Once again you present us with beautiful poetry. Hugs, Deb |
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