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Here Next to Me |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I’m lonely tonight, darling-- Won’t you come and take me away? This heart sits in silence-- Won’t you sing me That beautiful melody of yours? There really aren’t many words That can reach me tonight, Except for those select few You whispered into my ear That night. There’s no flow Without you here; Nothing can pass the time When you’re gone. Won’t see a smile; Won’t feel any joy Until you show me the stars once again. I guess there’s only one solution-- One answer to this tragic longing-- Your arms around me; Your heart beating Here next to me. 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Lovely poem,full of longing and desire. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Such lovingly longing thoughts - 'I guess there’s only one solution-- One answer to this tragic longing-- Your arms around me; Your heart beating Here next to me.' I was reminded of that lovely classic by Karen Carpenter 'Close To You'. Enjoyed this render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
it is torturous wanting to be with someone who you love...enjoyed snowpants..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
sp, Very well written here. The pain and longing reach right out and pull you in. Hang in there. Happiness will find you my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Tony: thanks! glad you liked it! Marge: you're right! I didn't even think of that one. well, thank you for stopping by for a read!  Victoria: yes, yes, it is. especially on these cold December nights! thanks! LW: thanks! I appreciate your warm words! sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like the perfect solution to me my friend. Your writing is growing with each and every post and you came in a shining star so you now know of the level you are at. Superbly written and one for my library for sure. Loved it. (Can't wait for the season to start again so that I can finally get the poem for me "CARDINALS" written by you. )A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, my friend, that seems to be the only one I could come up with. Thank you for your kind words. I am honored to be praised by a fine poet such as yourself. And, about that Cardinals poem, don't hold your breath...  sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris-- BEAUTIFUL!!!! Loved this, I did. Even though it was sad, still amazing and full of that huge heart of yours. got a big smile on my face now thanks to you take care. ~~~~~~~ ~a~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is lovely. I can feel the yearning from here. |
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