Open Poetry #11 |
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With You |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Looking back On the time gone by, I have done everything On my own; All of my goals Were achieved alone. As the seasons continue to change, I am finding that all those years Of doing it by myself Have come to an end. I don't want to be alone anymore; I don't want to do it all On my own. I want to experience All that comes my way With you there, Seeing all that I will see. I don't want to do anything Unless we're working at it together. It's all so simple. For the rest of my life, We will exist as one. There is nothing I will go through Without you. Each day of my life Will find you by my side. Never go away from me; Always know that I will be Waiting to taste life Along with you. 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
(sigh) never give up the dream...it will come to pass one day ![]() |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris~ wow another "gift" from your pen. you are spoiling me this evening ![]() nah seriously sweetie, this is beautiful and so touching. i hope he only knows the beautiful person he has waiting to be by his side. take care. ~amy~ ~~~~~~~~~~ ô¿ô o |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris~ wow another "gift" from your pen. you are spoiling me this evening ![]() nah seriously sweetie, this is beautiful and so touching. i hope he only knows the beautiful person he has waiting to be by his side. take care. ~amy~ ~~~~~~~~~~ ô¿ô o |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This, indeed, is a true declaration of love....well penned ![]() |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Jeffrey: thank you! I'm glad you could stop by. ![]() Aim: awww. spoiling you, eh? well, now. seriously, thank you once again, my friend, for your kind words. I'm glad you liked it! ![]() -e ~~~~~ Balladeer: it is an honor to have a reply from you! I am glad you could stop by, too! ![]() 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Never ever give up on your dreams my friend. You show alot of heart in this one and I am sure with your attitude that you can and WILL find the means to your dreams. Excellent write from you on this one. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love declarations of love and this one is beautiful. I am sure your dream will come true, dear one. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Mark: thank you for your kind words of encouragement. they mean a lot to me. I'm glad you liked it! ![]() Startime: thank you! I am glad you could stop by and enjoy!! ![]() sp 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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