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This Time |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Within your eyes I see it It beckons me with it's glow I am lost within it's shadows Every time I look I feel it grow Within your smile I sense it It's beauty calls out to me A simple gesture on it's own Yet it holds me captively Within your laugh I hear it Calling out my name Telling me you are the one That life will never be the same Within your touch I feel it Reaching for my heart This time I'll let it catch me This time I'll let love start [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Soft as a whisper, and so very romantic... loved reading this... -Tier |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Tier  "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff-- this gave me goosebumps (good ones). very beautiful and full of such hope. i hope love "this time" gives you all you deserve and more. good luck my friend. amazing write, but i expect nothing less from your wonderful pen. take care. ~amy~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Within your eyes I see it It beckons me with it's glow I am lost within it's shadows Every time I look I feel it grow ============== ahhhh sweet sweet anticpation ... brings with it sweet inspiration perfect jeff...very nice to see the hope in your words later-all-aglow-gator  jm I looked into the sky for my anthem The words and music came through But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen Looking into you |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks Amy & Jan-gator "This time" "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Wonderful writing here my friend. I hope this time is better than ever. May you always have hope for the future. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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