Open Poetry #11 |
Until Time Should Cease |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Until Time Should Cease For all eternity until time should cease to be I make this vow that your hearts beauty I will see When the world stops turning and falls apart I promise you will always hold onto my heart When the sun turns black and ice rains down I swear that my heart won't wear a frown When all around me offer their truth as lies I declare that you wear the truth in your eyes When hatred seems to call me its close mate I know that with love I can slam shut the gate When distrust and dishonour crowd all around I am certain you stop me hiding underground When all I touch seems to be tainted with doubt I know that your strength I am never without For if the stars should all disappear from view I can still see the shining stars when I look at you For all you are and for all you can ever say I thank you and love for granting me this day Whenever I leave here and with the angels' rest I shall feel your love in that home we all love best Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet bubbles hugs,g "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
For all you are and for all you can ever say I thank you and love for granting me this day Whenever I leave here and with the angels' rest I shall feel your love in that home we all love best Beautiful sentiments "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, your thoughts raise your heart to heaven... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, thank you love, how's things? I will E you soon I promise. And if I haven't send me a telling off. Jeffrey, thank you lots I do appreciate it Kari, Thank you very muchly. (I know there were a load of them yesterday ) Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ What a lovely heartfelt piece. Very nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, thank you very muchly. I really do appreciate you leaving a reply, you know that don't you. I can write replies to all the other poets here, and they flow from my pen (Well keyboard, but it's the same difference) I just can't seem to reply to my own. I can say thank you, and I do, but then that's it. I think it's because I don't expect any replies at all. (Well yes I do, but only because my friends here like to say hi! ) So although I can enthuse over your work and that of the other Passionate Poets, I can't over mine. This is just an explaination really because I don't think a simple thank you shows how much I appreciate you all, because I truly do. Long live Passions! Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Thank you is more than enough when you have already gifted us with this kind of beauty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed the softness of your message Marsha...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, almost sounds like a wedding ceremony. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, thank you love, and you know I truly mean it. But it's not half as beautiful as the beauty that you gift here. James thank you very muchly. Sandra, how are you? I haven't seen you name for a few days, are you okay, I do hope so. Take care of yourself. And thank you, truly. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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