Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Gallery--Kethry (write on) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
With the pen in her hands Revealing her life I can see The stories of her heart Echoing across the page Offering comfort Nuturing many Knowing that with Every sunrise There will be Hope in the new day Revealing her life, her heart to You -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, What a sweet tribute to a wonderful poet ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a lovely acrostic sven..she will enjoy it ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kethry is a beautiful poet and deserves this praise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She will fly, seeing this... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very beautiful tribute, from a great Poet. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It's perfect for her, Sven Great job!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I'm speechless. A first for me. *HuGS* Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is so nice Sven... K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
this iis lovely Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Beautiful...for isnt this the reason we all write? and i like the concise way you expressed these thoughts too |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
rp, thank you for reading. . . Victoria, thank you my friend. . . Balladeer, thank you also. . . she is a wonderful person. . . Sunshine, I think that she did. . . inot2B, thank you! Pepper, that's what I wanted to hear. . . thank you. . . K, glad that you enjoyed. . . Maria, thank you my friend. . . Kaile, indeed it is my friend, and thank you. . . Kethry, I'm sitting here amazed that you're speechless. . . My friend, your words have done much for me and for all of us. . . thank you for them and in the spirit of friendship. . . write on ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sven... what a lovely poem you have penned for a lovely poet. i agree her words have healed many of us. she is a great person/poet as are you. im very impressed with what you're doing! take care. ~amy~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, lovely tribute to one of Passions best. I am sure she loved this!! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Lovely writing. I see her just like that!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sven, this one of Kethry that you write Is a touching tribute to a special LadyPoetFriend of all of ours... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sven: How lovely this is - a great tribute to Kethry - I can't believe she would be speechless, she has such style in her writings as do you Sir Roniece |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, thank you as always my friend. . . glad that you're enjoying. . . GS, I'm sure that she did also. . .thank you. . . LW, then I have done well. . . thanks for reading. . . poetfriend Coco, thank you. . . Roniece, I was surprised to see her speechless as well. . . thank you -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven Loved the way you put this one together, very fitting my friend..well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Perfectly written for one sweet lady |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OH YES, OH YES.Oh Sven, she is all of those things. You and your writing are simply delightful. I love it. Thank you so very much. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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