Open Poetry #11 |
Stranded |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Stranded I plan to place upon the green memory strands of you. Each bead a perfect pearl of thought, each string connecting two. On tip of boughs, you're lighted up by sparkles, softened white. Standing there, together we to dance in shadow's night. I often think about this day, peacefully I stand, Waiting for the distant call a thread together strand... One that holds the heart of me next to the heart of you. Polished gold the two of us, untarnished, holding true. That night we'll reign, and feast upon a banquet fit for kings. Then myst upon each other, whisper breaths to each will sing, Of silken ties and satin lace desires, sheer in thought, Viewing sparkles, reflections of the presence each has brought. Upon each strand will place the words as ornaments to share. Each one a gift of poetry in time of memory, there. And as I glance, that special eve within my heart will grow more loving thoughts, of you and I of secrets to bestow. A picture perfect holiday even if alone, Because the warmth you give to me will carry on in stone Engraved upon, forever mine, your words "till next we meet" When someday becomes everyday and life shall be complete. ~Wynter * thank you simpleman for your "stranded" thoughts |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very creative Wynter..lovely thoughts. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* beautiful and romantic. I loved this. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When someday becomes everyday and life shall be complete ================================ Well woven verse. Thanx. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very well done. Soft and charming. Enjoyed it very much. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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simpleman46 New Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 7Michigan |
So beautiful... I'm glad my poem could inspire such beautiful thoughts. |
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