Open Poetry #11 |
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Purple Words, Golden Threads |
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Sunshine
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Purple Words, Golden Threads think of her smiling on words of old passions sure purple and gold colors of school tales to be told and long gone rules somehow royalty comes from within you are born either purple or gold and wear it well when compassion lies within the soul age came thank God and she accepted purple as the way of life but gold ran through her pen and through her words voices heard the within of past whens once she wrote and laid it bare it didn’t seem somehow to just lie there but grew wings on soft sweet breath took to the sky the skein of gold from twinkle of eye the passion of blue the soul of green and somewhere there inbetween wove the thread of love, the want of peace, the love of best, and troves and troves of treasured chest all in a thin skein of gold through purpled words of give, and live, UP and sighs elephants’ visits and warm goodbyes cheery morns and sun-sing songs all came about when she came along and took a slender skein of gold and wove it into purple of old a warm garment to wrap around the endearments of friends found new and that is what she did to you Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
absolutely wonderful. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written indeed...very creative sunshine ![]() ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
all came about when she came along and took a slender skein of gold and wove it into purple of old a warm garment to wrap around the endearments of friends found new and that is what she did to you ================================ And that's not all she has done. :,,,,-) Encore! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful words are spoken here. love it. Charisma |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, Karilea, when you write like this it is so easy to see the gold in your words. This is very beautiful...... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, I bet you live in Poetry Street in Poemland. This is just so fantastic. Loved it all the way. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, just WOW, this is utterly stunning love, it really is. Oh how I wish you could see through my eyes how this shines, it glistens, it glitters it is pure gold. Wonderful writing love absolutely wonderful. take care Majestic Marsha ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--this is pure gold...so exquisite!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can you hear me smile? I think so... Sven, thank you... Victoria, I don't get creative often, thank you for noticing... Interloper, was that a tear? Oh please...I would much rather you smile...unless of course you were smiling through tears..{~,~}...thank you... Thank you Charisma... LOL...'Deer...can you REALLY see the GOLD???lol...thank you!... Now Daniel, who allowed themselves to be paid for forwarding to you my home address? Humm?...thank you {~,^} Marsha, my friend...one of those skeins, well, I think YOU know her name... Martie...what indeed draws you in? I so enjoy knowing you've come to read...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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