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A Simple Psalm (for michael)
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A Simple Psalm (for michael) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I know I don't possess the grace-- I know the words are way beyond, and God, I cannot know your face - for wisdom? I can only long... Accept me in humility- and if you please? O hear my prayer? If there is just a gram of good, then multiply your presence there. Forgive me now, my false complaints. Redeem me from myself this day. If it is true, I've angels sent, I beg that they will hear me pray. Pardon my audacity, assumption of command, but be it true, I've guardians, I ask you stay thier hand. Direct them, please, to one who needs, a fair and righteous man. May they bring sweet songs to sing with touch of healing hand. Let Your light shine mighty - strong... May seraphim unite in song and Passions join to sing along by direct of Your command. A poet's prayer-- of life aware - a simple psalm to heal a man. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh the beauty of this has tears in my eyes. I love it, dear one. It is perfect. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh sen this is SOOOO beautiful and SOOO perfect.. and theres nothing "simple" bout it... yes we all ask for angels to watch over our dear sweet Michael ... hes so special... and so are you me twin.. this is such a beautiful prayer poem... your heart shines in every verse baby... and touches deep. big hugs to ya for this one me sweet love ya muchly me Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en* From your pen to the wings of angels...this is beautiful my sweet friend and your heart and soul and glowing in each perfectly woven line...Love and hugs~ We love you Michael and you are in our prayers and daily thoughts~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--This is perfectly written from your heart and I know that all that listen will hear it. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
absolutely spiritually beautiful!!!! this is a prayer.... and will be heard |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
I wanted to close my eyes and pray this with you. Very touching. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This was beautiful and touching, serenity. Thank you for such a special poem. Michael |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Funny thing about this one...it just sort of fell "through" me. And I was surprised too. Thank you all, for praying with me. Michael? Our prayers are indeed with you. You have touched so many here, and I think that you should know that. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
My prayers are with you Michael  Sista, you did really good hon, absolutely beautiful! "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Amen... This is wonderful, serenity.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- this is so beautiful.. what a wonderful, and caring write you've penned for Michael.. Michael...my prayers are with you.. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Maree, Nan and vicky...and a shameless *bump* for Michael today... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I pray with you..... softly and heartfelt prayer. excellent penned. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
S'en excellent write, prayers for Michael coming his way. Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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