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Does A Heart Wonder?
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Does A Heart Wonder? |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Does A Heart Wonder?  Always giving, always loving Keeping alive gentleness Stirring hatred and carelessness Sharing, living, dying A heart wanders thinking But does a heart wonder Does a heart need an answer ~~Daniel J D~~ Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) [This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 12-01-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel J D, his is WONDERFUL, I love this one, it's excellant. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm going to bet you the whole ten dollars I've got in the bank that a heart does wonder and it does need an answer....but in a different way than the norm...in a deep seated emotional way...very good idea for a poem Daniel....very well done indeed!! |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
** Yes Sir...In my opinion the heart does wonder, and it also needs to be answered.. "...without love, a starving heart will die." **Awesome poem..Excellent!!!!!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ mutington(joyce)  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes a heart does wonder, sometimes they need an answer...sometime she only give, without questions.... love this wonderful penned poem ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I've often thought each beat is a plea for another. I believe a heart does need an answer, a reason to keep beating. I enjoyed this one very much. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a wonderful and well-written piece Daniel...I also think that the heart needs an answer....take care! Nathan |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Much to ponder here Sir Daniel...I would have to say My heart doesn't need an answer...only a reason to question. Fantastic writing~ The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, Thank you, I hope to get a few answers from this poem. Ethome, Cheers, the ten dollars I could do with. Are'nt poets supposed to be poor. Mutington, Thank you, if that is the case, I have to really check mine. Charisma, If it does, what does it wonder about? Thanks for the reply. Irish Rose, I am glad you liked this one, I am still puzzled though. Nate, If that is so, what answers do we give when the pains of sorrow keep returning. Butterflies, Thank you, I like your straightforwardness, wonderful reply. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel what a perfectly wonderful question...does the heart wonder? Does it wonder if you care? Does it wonder if its worth the pain? Does it wonder if this is the right choice? MY heart questions me all the time...so I would have to agree with the majority here...yes the heart wonders...it questions...it strives...hugs to you darlin Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Your reply says it all, thank you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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