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two winter haiku
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two winter haiku |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
03) in brisk blue air one unfallen apple clings to a black branch. 04) Figures of light etched in filigrees of ice - snow on my window. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Beki...great images!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great imagery....love them very much. Charisma |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks ethome and charisma  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
vivid color, nice imagery... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading both of these... You have such a wonderful way of expressing yourself in Haiku! Very good! -Tier |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thank you so much Sunshine and Tier... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely haiku, enjoyed them both... Poeminister |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Just a question: What's the least amount of syllables you can have in a haiku? [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i knew you would deliver...and dont thank me for ereading your work, it has been sheer pleasure to be able to |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Vivid...loved remembering the filligree on the icy windows...thanks for the memories! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Beki, Delightful vignettes of winter, so aptly done! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Poeminister, I don't believe there is a minimum, I have seen them published with as few as 7-8 words...they may never be OVER 17 syllables tho...12-17 seems to be the norm, with those who don't hold with the 17 syllabla standard. Kaile, Beki smiles VAS, thanks a bunch. Dennis, I loved your haiku, I have written many poems about just such a moon. Thank you for sharing yours |
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