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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-11-30 07:37 PM


The Lady that lives with Jesus

Almost one year from this day and still at times I ponder why
that precise moment would soon arrive in which my precious friend was destined to die
leaving me alone to wonder in dismay why she would leave on the very day
I simply needed her to stay.
Only God knows the moment when our time on earth is done.
so when her time arrived he merely said to her
"Come onto me fair one.  Your time on earth is done.
Yet heavenly time has just begun."
And I know in my heart I shall worry no more
for a beautiful lady living with Jesus forevermore.

Jameslee@November30,2000
Inmemoryofmyprecious
friendMargaret.

© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2000-11-30 07:41 PM


Such a beautiful tribute to a lady you loved dearly. It is saddest for us who are left behind to feel their absense. You have put it beautifully in this poem as you share that you know in your heart you will see your dear friend again someday. This was sadly beautiful. Much love from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Denise
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2 posted 2000-11-30 07:46 PM


This is a beautiful touching tribute, James. Lovely.

Denise

Victoria
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3 posted 2000-11-30 08:02 PM


a sad one indeed..nicely written James..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


SEA
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4 posted 2000-11-30 08:43 PM


James~ what a beautiful way to remember your special friend   Hugs to you sweetie   -SEA
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-11-30 08:46 PM


James,

What a sweet tribute to a dear friend.  I am sure she will be waiting to greet you on the other side.  Nice writing.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Nate Dogg
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6 posted 2000-12-01 04:42 PM



This is very beautiful and sweet tribute to the lady that you've lost Jimmy....good job!



Nathan

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7 posted 2000-12-01 04:55 PM


lovely tribute for a precious lady.

heartfelt poem.

((hugs))
Charisma

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2000-12-02 01:05 AM


Hi sweetie...this is such a sweet loving tribute to your friend...hugs to you
A Whisper's Caress
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9 posted 2000-12-02 02:39 AM


such a beautiul tribute from a beautiful heart

Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-12-02 07:45 AM


perfect SBJ... a sweet and well done tribute to your dear Margret...I recall your poems
of her in the past..
the first year anniversary is always the hardest...I know ...
your reflections  of her are perfect way to do her justice
take care sweet poet
jm

I looked into the sky for my anthem
The words and music came through
But words and music can never touch the beauty that I've seen
Looking into you

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-12-10 05:04 PM


I appreciate each and every one of you for reading and understanding...the softness within your hearts is beautiful...James
KokoStewartKoomoa
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12 posted 2000-12-10 05:17 PM


A very well done and beautiful tribute to your departed friend! And i know she is waiting quite happily on the other side, smiling and free!
God bless you

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



Irish Rose
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13 posted 2000-12-10 05:20 PM


This reminded me of my Aunt Margaret, who I know is with Jesus, and I nearly broke down and cried!  Thank you for posting this one.



"Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version
of someone else." Marilyn Monroe


JamesMichael
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14 posted 2000-12-21 05:56 PM


Thank you Koko and Irish for spending this time with me.  She was a wonderful friend...I enjoyed her much and I miss her much...she will have a glorious Christmas with her heavenly father the one that gave us the true meaning of Christmas when he gave us his precious son Jesus...for God so Loved the world that he gave his only begotten son...best wishes for Christmas...James
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