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Today We Said Good-bye....
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Today We Said Good-bye.... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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Today we said good-bye After only a few brief encounters I know it is for the best For both, your heart and mine For a moment I felt like crying Then I realized a truth That we had the chance to teach each other And we learned that we could still love Though we can't be together You will always have a place in my heart And we'll always have our memories That only you and I share Ones that no one can take away And that is special on it's own I'm glad that we can part as friends And still talk, soul to soul It's seems a bittersweet end to me That we know how we feel But still can't be together Yet we both know what it would mean If we ever really were So take this....  One last kiss And hold it close to your heart For you will always have a place in mine |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
If one has to say good-bye then this is a beautiful way to do it. *sigh* it is never easy to let go but you have done so with gentleness. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know it is for the best For both, your heart and mine =================== Then I realized a truth That we had the chance to teach each other And we learned that we could still love =================== And we'll always have our memories That only you and I share Ones that no one can take away And that is special on it's own =================== Yet we both know what it would mean If we ever really were =================== So take this.... One last kiss And hold it close to your heart For you will always have a place in mine ================ jeff this is so sincere and yes bittersweet, yet it is so touching in its lessons learned and in its gitf of letting go out of love. very emotionally sweet writing from you. Im sure it was'nt easy to write... yet it was.(i know) take care gentle poet jm Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Startime and Janet, It wasn't easy to write this, yet it was easy to write....talk about mixed emotions....There is a song that says exactly how I feel (sigh) In This Life by Collin Raye For all I've been blessed with in this life there was an emptiness in me I was imprisoned by the power of gold With one honest touch you set me free Let the world stop turning Let the sun stop burning Let them tell me love's not worth going through If it all falls apart I will know deep in my heart The only dream that mattered had come true In this life I was loved by you For every mountain I have climbed Every raging river crossed You were the treasure that I longed to find Without your love I would be lost Let the world stop turning Let the sun stop burning Let them tell me love's not worth going through If it all falls apart I will know deep in my heart The only dream that mattered had come true In this life I was loved by you |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 Sad to know that what we don't want to do is what we have to do. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Sad one, but I know that you saw this is the way it has to be for you right now. I know that opportunity will be knocking on your door in no time my friend. Saying good-bye is never an easy thing to do for anyone. Take care. Jenn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
One last kiss ... hold it close to your heart For you will always have a place in mine beautiful sentiments Jeffrey ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Elizabeth, Jen and Wynter...As I said before this wasn't easy to write or come to terms with, but I realize how tough being together would have been...for both of us....and I know that this is the right thing to do...Life does go on...and I will always have my memories of "us" |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Jeffrey, as I know how difficult it is to say goodbye, I have to tell you, this is outstanding. So take this.... One last kiss And hold it close to your heart For you will always have a place in mine I have yet to have the courage to say THIS goodbye. thank you for this wonderful post Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ Such a parting is so gently expressed in your thoughts. 'And we learned that we could still love Though we can't be together' Love from the heart and wisdom from within gives you the chance to live love again Though it may not be easy to have to part The loving memories are kept deep in your heart *Heart-Hugs* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
A Whisper's Caress...Yes, it is difficult to say good-bye, Yet we both knew it was for the best...I just wish we would have kissed one more time (sigh) Marge, M'Lady, You are such a sweetheart. Thank you for the words of encouragement. And in my heart They will forever stay Never, No, Never To go away "Don't wish upon a star...Reach for one!!" |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
One sweet kiss.. is worth a thousand words........ but you my dear..... have captured all there is to say........ Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
(sigh) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nicely written!!!!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff~ a very difficult piece i'm sure to write...but you did so with elegance and grace. i'm sorry that things did not go as planned. but hold onto the memories and the lessons learned from this. those will last a lifetime and maybe just maybe you and this special person will find your way back to one another. never give up the hope, but eventually you will move on with heart and soul intact. take care. ~amy~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jeffery, It is so hard to say good-bye. However, it is wonderful if you can make a friendship work.. your souls have touched briefly. That special connection of friendship is also a love that is rarely found. Hugs to you. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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